Kitsune Archer

[Denegoth]

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This card cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card's controller takes any damage, destroy this card. You take no Battle Damage from battles involving this card. This monster may attack your opponent's Life Points directly. Each time this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, it gains 200 ATK. This card may not have more than 1600 ATK. When an Equip Card is equipped to this card, destroy the Equip Card.[/align]

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Fix:

 

This card cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card's controller takes any damage, destroy this card. You take no Battle Damage from battles involving this card. This monster can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. Each time this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, it gains 200 ATK. This card cannot have more than 1600 ATK. When an Equip Spell Card is equipped to this card, destroy it.

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italic = unsure about a correction

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Pic could use a background.

 

Overall, another good idea. Some people would probably look at this and think it's overpowered. But seeing as its destroyed when you take ANY damage kinda balances it. (IMO, anyway)

 

8/10

[Denegoth]

Fix:

 

This card cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card's controller takes any damage' date=' destroy this card. You take no Battle Damage from battles involving this card. This monster [b']can[/b] attack your opponent's Life Points directly. Each time this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, it gains 200 ATK. This card cannot have more than 1600 ATK. When an Equip Spell Card is equipped to this card, destroy it.

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italic = unsure about a correction

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Pic could use a background.

 

Overall, another good idea. Some people would probably look at this and think it's overpowered. But seeing as its destroyed when you take ANY damage kinda balances it. (IMO, anyway)

 

8/10

 

Most of the OCG errors are because I was using OCG from old cards (don't know too many new ones with the effects I needed.)

 

Equip card destruction taken from Gearfried the Iron Knight

Life point attacking taken from Leghul

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Old OCG isn't too bad (especially when you're starting), but most people here look up to newer OCG.

[Schitzofrenic]

Is this a naruto pic? 7 tails

[Diabloco]

Its nice and the pic is great. But I would make it a bit different, like putting some more disadvantages and change the 1600 to 3000. In that case it would be better to upgrade the level.

But has it is its fine 8,5/10

[hero2die]

Nice Card

i would to give 9/10

[Denegoth]

Is this a naruto pic? 7 tails

 

Not that I know of.

 

Its nice and the pic is great. But I would make it a bit different' date=' like putting some more disadvantages and change the 1600 to 3000. In that case it would be better to upgrade the level.

But has it is its fine 8,5/10

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Well it dies as soon as you take damage, so it's an easy kill. I think changing to 3000 would be a little too overpowered as it's constant life point attacking.