Wanderley Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Demon Soldier[align=center]By discarding 1 DARK monster from your hand, you can Special Summon this card in face-up Defense Position. When this card changes Battle Positions, return 1 Fiend-Type monster from your Graveyard to your hand. When this card is selected as an attack target, you can discard 2 cards from your hand and destroy 1 card your opponent controls or negate the attack.[/align] the OCG is not right^^please if you are a 5 star and above that can correct it^^ Background is added by me^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 defense position = Defense Positionnegged = negatedDARK card = DARK monsterbattle position = Battle Position Sorry that I corrected this even though I'm not a 5-star, but I'm still good at card making. Picture is great, just fix these OCG errors and it'll be great! 8.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Schitzofrenic Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 By discarding 1 DARK monster from your hand, you can Special Summon this card into face-up defense position. When the battle position of this card is changed, return 1 Fiend-Type monster from your Graveyard to your hand. When this card is selected as an attack target, discard 2 cards from your hand and destroy 1 card your opponent controls or negate the attack. At least some correction Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 negated is right but the other not thank you^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Schitzofrenic Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 yeah, it has this typical wanderley-mistakes...:lol:the 3rd person "s" and the passive form arent your friends, eh?But else, its a really good card! Great Job!:o9.2/9.9 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 defense position = Defense Positionnegged = negatedDARK card = DARK monsterbattle position = Battle Position Sorry that I corrected this even though I'm not a 5-star' date=' but I'm still good at card making. Picture is great, just fix these OCG errors and it'll be great! 8.5/10.[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Fix: By discarding 1 DARK monster from your hand, you can Special Summon this card in face-up Defense Position. When this card changes the Battle Positions, return 1 Fiend-Type monster from your Graveyard to your hand. When this card is selected as an attack target, you can discard 2 cards from your hand and destroy 1 card your opponent controls to negate the attack.____________________________________________________ Name is kinda meh-ish. Something commonly used. And I agree that the pic is good. I'd lower the ATK and DEF a bit to make it more balanced. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 yeah' date=' it has this typical wanderley-mistakes...:lol:the 3rd person "s" and the passive form arent your friends, eh?But else, its a really good card! Great Job!:o9.2/9.9[/quote'] yes your right grammar is not my friend^^ thank you ;-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 I wold put 1600 DEF and 1500 ATKRate? 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Fix: By discarding 1 DARK monster from your hand' date=' you can Special Summon this card [b']in[/b] face-up Defense Position. When this card changes the Battle Positions, return 1 Fiend-Type monster from your Graveyard to your hand. When this card is selected as an attack target, you can discard 2 cards from your hand and destroy 1 card your opponent controls to negate the attack.____________________________________________________ Name is kinda meh-ish. Something commonly used. And I agree that the pic is good. I'd lower the ATK and DEF a bit to make it more balanced. 8/10 thank you^^ i know not the best name^^ i lower the ATK to 1300 and DEF to 1500^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diabloco Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Cool card, and its pic is great 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 thank you^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L. Rutsah Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 destroy one card? that's a bit op Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 not it isn't because you can active the effect if you selet as an attack target^^and then you must discard 2 cards for destroy^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted June 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killertrey40 Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 aswome card! 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted June 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 thank you^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Ehr..what is the "Elite"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 instead of destroying a card your opponent controls, you should say destroy one FACE up card your opponent controls, or it may be slightly on the OP end 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted June 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 thank you^^ Ehr..what is the "Elite"? I'm the Elite^^"Elite member" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gudari88 Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 Nice card I would have puted 1500 ATK // 1500 DEF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 Seems overpowered IMO. It's pretty easy to summon, can supply you with cards which you can then use to activate it's other effect allowing it to destroy a card. Add a drawback. Perhaps lower it's ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted June 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 i think it is a little bit strong but not OP^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted June 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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