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Demon Warrior Karzi ++Halo Ring++ (updated)


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OK well I just made this card, so lemme know what u think.

 

Plz rate and comment!

 

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Effect : This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only Special Summoned by removing from play 1 Dark and Light type monster from your graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field all Dark type monsters cannot declare an attack. During your standby phase roll a six sided die.

If the result was even, destroy all monsters on your side of the field except this card and change this card's Battle Position into Defense Position.

If the result was odd, destroy all spell or trap cards on your opponents side of the field.

 

UPDATE

 

Made a real version , not much differnce except I corrected the effect , changed the pic and attribute

 

V2

 

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Effect : This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only Special Summoned by removing from play 1 Dark and Light Monster from your Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field all Light Monsters cannot declare an attack. During your standby phase roll a six sided die.

If the result was even, destroy all monsters on your side of the field except this card and change this card's Battle Position into Defense Position.

If the result was odd, destroy all spell or trap cards on your opponents side of the field.

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i) Er...why is a demon a LIGHT monster??

ii) Also, don't make fake types...or dual types...also, change it to Fiend-Type (being a demon and all)

iii) 'dark' and 'light' should be 'DARK' and 'LIGHT'

iv) 'Dark type' should be 'DARK'

v) Why is a demon stopping DARK monsters from attacking? Surely it would stop LIGHT monsters from attacking...

 

This is a very odd card...almost as if you couldn't make up your mind when you made it...

 

Rating: 5/10

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Effect : This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only Special Summoned by removing from play 1 Dark and Light type monster from your graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field all Dark type monsters cannot declare an attack. During your standby phase roll a six sided die.

If the result was even, destroy all monsters on your side of the field except this card and change this card's Battle Position into Defense Position.

If the result was odd, destroy all spell or trap cards on your opponents side of the field.

 

Correct Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 1 DARK and 1 LIGHT monster on the field from play. While this card is face-up on the field, DARK monsters cannot declare and attack. During your Standby Phase, roll a six-sided die. Activate one of the effects based on the result:

● Even Number: Destroy all monsters you control other than this card and switch this card to Defense Position.

● Odd Number: Destroy all Spell and Trap cards your opponent controls.

 

1st pic is much better, but overused, I'm afraid.

 

You could do better.

 

7/10

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