union rebel Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Well these are my first cards so plz dont critize unless its good.If you want tell me your fav k? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
To-Chi Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Sorry to say, there's no "Ghost"-type. It's "Zombie". Dumb as that is, I must acknowledge and, thus, point it out. Pictures aren't the greatest, but acceptable. Also, alot of incorrect OCG, but for first cards not the worst I've seen. Gavytird seems VERY underpowered, and, really, almost useless. With Nimid, you may wat to alter the "Special Summon...with 1000 DEF" to something like "...with 1000 or more DEF" or "...with 1000 or less DEF." Making it exact kinda' messes up the synergy (but not much, considering most other "Ghost Hero" cards have EXACTLY 1000 DEF...) Also, on Olop, you put "Your card discards one card..." which doesn't make any sense. Alot of errors, but I'll give you a n00b bonus: 48(Base Score) -25(Very Bad OCG) -10(Bad Pics) +10(Uncommon Archetype) +50(Benefit of the n00b Bonus) =73/100. Not the worst for a first, but amp up some of the cards, and vary the defenses. Fix that OCG (there's a topic somewhere on these forums to help with that...) and the balance and you'll be on your way. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
union rebel Posted June 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Oh,looks like i did it again.Sry bout that.The cards were supposed to be uploaded on the YCM wiki thats why their ghost,but lets just say they are Zombies k? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
To-Chi Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Th-there's a wiki? For Yu-Gi-Oh! Card Maker? That right? Oh yeah, and I like the dual-attribute idea. Haven't seen that... Well... Anywhere! I'm sure there's some out there, but this isn't a common thing. Pokemon YGO cards... Now those are common *shudders* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
union rebel Posted June 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Yea I should fix them up a little & thx for pointing out the typo for me.The dual attribute is useful & if you noticed,they all have the FIRE attribute. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guy22 Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 some bad pictures. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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