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That Which Is Not Dead... My First Set


drrockso20

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1st card-

put a comma after attack

"if you win...", it should be something like "if there are at least 2 heads...."

life points should be Life Points

need a period

2nd Card-

need a period

3rd card-

summoned should be Summoned

graveyard should be Graveyard

one should be 1

spell or trap should be Spell or Trap

4th card-

graveyard should be Graveyard

need a period

life points should be Life Points

5th card-

period needed

6th card-

graveyard should be Graveyard

standby phase should be Standby Phase

life points should be Life Points

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1st card-

put a comma after attack

"if you win..."' date=' it should be something like "if there are at least 2 heads...."

life points should be Life Points

need a period

2nd Card-

need a period

3rd card-

summoned should be Summoned

graveyard should be Graveyard

one should be 1

spell or trap should be Spell or Trap

4th card-

graveyard should be Graveyard

need a period

life points should be Life Points

5th card-

period needed

6th card-

graveyard should be Graveyard

standby phase should be Standby Phase

life points should be Life Points[/b']

thank you for the corrections I'll implement them as soon as possible and what is your opinion of the cards themselves

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