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Additional Spell Card to the Dwarven Mini Set, Need Assistance in OCG


Krogun

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This spell card is part of a set of Cards I am working on. The set so far can be found on the following links. Reviews over these Cards would be appreciated as well as Contructive Criticisms. I am especially looking to see if these cards are at all Balance.

 

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-127253.html

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-127223.html

 

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Equip only to a "Dwarven" monster. When the equipped monster destroys a monster on your opponent's side of the field, inflict Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to half the ATK of the destroyed monster. Pay 500 Life Points during each of your End Phases. If you do not do this, this card and the equipped monster are sent to the Graveyard.

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Switch 50% to half' date=' and "Kill" to destroyed.

Thats it.

 

Otherwise its fine.

Also, consider doing an edit to combine all 3 threads into one.

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Okay thanks, I was considering in doing so except that I cannot delete threads for some reason yet in order to post a thread with all cards together.

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This is quite good, goes well with the other cards:

 

OCG: Equip only to a "Dwarven" monster. When the equipped monster destroys a monster on your opponent's side of the field, inflict Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to half the ATK of the destroyed monster. Pay 500 Life Points during each of your End Phases. If you do not do this, this card and the equipped monster are sent to the Graveyard.

 

That should do it

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This is quite good' date=' goes well with the other cards:

 

OCG: Equip only to a "Dwarven" monster. When the equipped monster destroys a monster on your opponent's side of the field, inflict Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to half the ATK of the destroyed monster. Pay 500 Life Points during each of your End Phases. If you do not do this, this card and the equipped monster are sent to the Graveyard.

 

[i']That should do it[/i]

 

Sounds alot better thanks alot for the help. The only question I have is do I need to state that this damage is in addition to any Battle Damage? Editing this now.


Also' date=' rate my card?

this one

 

And give a Reputation rating too?

(:

 

Will do =), would appreciate a rating here as well. :P

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This is quite good' date=' goes well with the other cards:

 

OCG: Equip only to a "Dwarven" monster. When the equipped monster destroys a monster on your opponent's side of the field, inflict Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to half the ATK of the destroyed monster. Pay 500 Life Points during each of your End Phases. If you do not do this, this card and the equipped monster are sent to the Graveyard.

 

[i']That should do it[/i]

 

Sounds alot better thanks alot for the help. The only question I have is do I need to state that this damage is in addition to any Battle Damage? Editing this now.


 

No, since it is assumed Damage Calculation is worked out normally.

 

 

Also' date=' rate my card?

this one

 

And give a Reputation rating too?

(:

 

Dreamfactory, that's spamming. You could get negged and reported for it. Don't do it again.

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