Rise of the Darksworn plz view, rate and give tips on how to fix the OCG ty in advanced :P

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Enjoy :P

 

All "Lightsworn" and "Darksworn" monsters gain ATK and DEF equal to the number of "Lightsworn" and "Darksworn" monsters that are in the graveyard and removed from play x100. Each time a card(s) would be sent from the Deck to the Graveyard as a result from an effect of a "Darksworn" or "Lightsworn" monster, you may send 1 more card from the Deck to the Graveyard, this effect is treated as an effect of a "Darksworn" and a "Lightsworn" monster.

 

i had trouble with the wording of this effect, plz tell me how to fix it if it is worded wierd. ty in advanced :P

 

Discard one "Darksworn" monster from your hand, then draw 2 cards. If any of those cards are "Darksworn" monsters, reveal them to your opponent to draw 1 more card

 

i changed this card's effect, so it is different than before.

Pay 4000 life points to remove from play all cards on the field, in both player's hands and graveyards. Then special summon 1 "Dark Judgement Dragon" from your deck (ignoring its summoning conditions). The "Dark Judgement Dragon" may attack this turn regaurdless of effects that negate attacks or negate the declaration of attacks.

When a "Darksworn" monster is destroyed by battle, you can remove it and the attacking monster from play to draw 2 cards.

When this card battles an opponent's monster, this card gains 100 ATK equal to the number of "Darksworn" monsters removed from play. During each of your End Phases, send the top 3 cards from your Deck to the Graveyard. If any "Darksworn" monsters were sent to the Graveyard this way, remove those monsters from play. you may have only 1 "Darhk, the Darksworn Warlord on your side of the field.

Once per turn you can discard one card from your hand to special summon one "Darksworn" monster from your Graveyard. During your End Phase sen the top 3 cards from your Deck to the Graveyard, if any "Darksworn" monsters were sent this way, remove the "Darksworn" monsters from play instead.

Each time a card(s) is sent from the deck and removed from play due to a "Darksworn" monster's card effect (except for "Garoth, Darksworn Shadowknight), send the top 2 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard, if any of those cards were "Darksworn" monsters, remove those "Darksworn monsters from play instead.

If this card is removed from play by a "Darksworn" monster's effect, special summon this card to your side of the field and send the top 2 cards from your deck to the graveyard, if any "Darksworn" monsters were sent to the graveyard this way, remove those monsters from play instead. When this card is removed from play from the field, its controller draws 1 card.

Once per turn you can remove from play one "Darksworn" monster on your side of the field (except this card) to destroy one spell or trap card on the field, this effect cannot be negated. During your End Phase send the top 3 cards from your deck to the graveyard, if any "Darksworn" monsters are sent this way, remove those monsters from play instead.

While another monster is on your side of the field, this monster cannot be selected as an attack target. All face up "Darksworn" monsters gain 400 ATK while this card is face up on your side of the field. During your End Phase send the top card of your deck to the graveyard, if the sent card was a "Darksworn" monster, remove it from play instead.

When this card is Normal Summoned, send the top 2 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard, if any "Darksworn" monsters were sent this way remove those "Darksworn" monsters from play. When this card is destroyed by battle, search your Deck for a "Darksworn" monster and add it to your hand.

This card gains 100 ATK and DEF for each "Darksworn" monster that is removed from play. During a battle between this attacking monster and an opponent's defense position monster whose DEF is lower than this card's ATK, inflict the difference as battle damages to your opponent's life points. During your End Phase send the top 3 cards from the top of your Deck to the Graveyard, if any "Darksworn" monsters are sent this way, remove those "Darksworn" monsters from play instead.

When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can special summon 1 Lvl 4 or lower "Darksworn" monster that has been removed from play except for "Spike, the Darksworn Hound".

This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned by having at least 4 "Darksworn" monsters removed from play. Pay 1000 life points to destroy all other cards on the field except this card. During your End Phase send the top 4 cards of your deck to the graveyard. If any "Darksworn" monsters are sent this way, remove those monsters from play instead.

 

Ta Da! syncros :P

 

 

1 "Darksworn" tuner + 1 or more non-tuner monsters

Each time a "Darksworn" monster is removed from play, gain life points equal to the removed monster's level x100. This card Gains 100 ATK for each "Darksworn" monster that is removed from play. During your End Phase send the top 4 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard, if any "Darksworn" monsters were sent this way, remove those "Darksworn monsters from play instead.

1 "Darksworn" tuner + 1 or more non-tuner monsters

Once per turn you can Special Summon 1 "Darksworn" monster that is removed from play. If you use this effect, lose life points equal to half of the Special Summoned monster's ATK. During your End Phase send the top 2 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard. If any "Darksworn" monsters were removed from play from this effect, remove those "Darksworn" monsters from play.

 

 

I think i got most of the OCG errors out of em all. if you spot any or just want to rate em let me know :P

[AlickimenT]

Wow, NICE! I love them but work on OCG.

23/10

[kingclude]

that is so awesome i like the dogs the best!!!

[evilherospencersimpson]

AWESOME...but maybe give the dogs more evil names!

40/10!

[gil2m]

cool 10/10

[TRUE RULER^(Imper.Di )]

their okay