my completly new deck

[demonslayer]

tell me if theres anything rong withem

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[.:Metal Militia:.]

Too many vanillas, and a couple of OCG problems.Not bad though.6.5/10

[Felix]

^A couple? These cards are terrible. Put some effort in next time.

[Agaming]

Too many vanillas' date=' and a couple of OCG problems.Not bad though.6.5/10

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i agree

 

^A couple? These cards are terrible. Put some effort in next time.

 

come on he's only posted 6 times he needs enciuredgement not bad comments

[Felix]

^A couple? These cards are terrible. Put some effort in next time.

 

come on he's only posted 6 times he needs enciuredgement not bad comments

 

He needs to put some effort in. He doesn't even have caps on the names:/ Not to mention 7 stupid Vanillas.

[hero2die]

The Cards are nice

but not so a Great idea

and it s not so for girls,it likes for Emos^^

 

7/10 i would give you :mr:green:

[ĎλЯклξššζ]

Cool ................ 7.5/10

[Mazerrick]

Too many normal monsters 5/10

[Max Darkness]

Okay, first off, don't make so many Normal Monsters...they're quite boring and people will hate you for it.

 

As for the cards:

 

Dragon of Light:

i) Capitalise name + make it more inventive

ii) Get a different picture (seen it 34 times and counting...)

iii) Don't make Divine-Beast monsters...people hate it

iv) If you're going to make a Divine-Beast, make sure its also a DIVINE monster

v) Give it an effect

 

Death:

i) More creative name needed

ii) Don't make fake types

iii) Overused picture

iv) It's a Normal Monster...but has an Effect?! Change it to an Effect Monster

v) Work on your OCG

 

Demon Warrior:

i) Capitalise name

ii) Don't make DIVINE monsters

iii) Don't make fake types

iv) Get a better picture

v) Give it an effect

 

Fire Dragon:

i) More creative name needed

ii) Overused picture

iii) 'dragon' = 'Dragon'

iv) Give it an effect

 

Lightning Bolt:

i) You're card is identical to "Earthshaker" : http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Earthshaker

 

The Winged Wolf:

i) Better picture needed

ii) Don't make fake types

iii) Give it an effect

 

Black Dragon:

i) More inventive name please

ii) Overused pic (21 times and counting...)

iii) 'DRAGON' should be 'Dragon'

iv) Give it an effect

 

Desert Demon:

i) Should probably be an EARTH monster

ii) Better pic needed

iii) Don't make fake types (should be Fiend-Type)

iv) Work on your OCG

 

Mage of Eternal Darkness:

i) Capitalise name

ii) Bad picture

iii) DON'T MAKE FAKE TYPES (should be Spellcaster-Type)

iv) Effect is too powerful

v) Work on your OCG

vi) Where is its ATK and DEF?

 

Ice Dragon Lord:

i) Capitalise name

ii) 'dragon' should be 'Dragon'

iii) Give it an effect

 

Also, if these are supposed to be in a deck...shouldn't they work together?

 

Suggestions:

i) Work on your English grammar and spelling

ii) Work on your OCG

iii) Do some research into card-making here by observing threads to learn the ropes.

 

I won't rate yet...

[badmajik]

I think they are cool

[Anacondas1]

1-Overpowered

2-To many normal monsters, try to make some effect monsters

3-OCG errors

 

So probably for now - 6/10

 

Follow what Max Darkness has said,

 

Anacondas1