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Anacondas1 Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Quite badly underpowered the second one is, and the first one is reasonable, For OCG see someone else really, i can do it, but someone else would be better at it. 8/10 :D Anacondas1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Quite good, considering you're a New Member Wondering Zombie:i) Change to "Wandering Skeleton" because it fits the picture better and spells 'wandering' correctly.ii) OCG:When this card is Normal Summoned, add 1 "Wandering Skeleton" to your hand from your Deck. Chiro...:i) FAR too powerful for a Lv.6! Either raise it to a Lv. 8 or decrease it's ATK to 1800.ii) 'First Edition' = '1st Edition'iii) 'Beast - Warrior' = 'Beast-Warrior'iv) OCG:If this card attacks a WIND monster, this card gains 500 ATK during the Damage Step only. Rather good overall. As for your Fusion in your sig...epic picture, but give it an effect. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anacondas1 Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Oh whoops, my eye sight is off, the second one is ridiculous over powered :D(Read it as 2100 :() Anacondas1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark one521 Posted June 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 I have made changes to the cards on this post that were suggested Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anacondas1 Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Wandering skeleton is wrong HISSSSSS Anavondas1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark one521 Posted June 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Wandering skeleton is wrong HISSSSSS Anavondas1 What would be a good name for it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anacondas1 Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 No i mean its effect Anacondas1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killertrey40 Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 with names in card text, put "" around them. Field would be just field, no capitals. you just put WIND, not wind attribute. damage step should be Damage Step. fire attribute should just be FIRE. graveyard should be Graveyard. I know most people dont tell you what to fix, so i did Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark one521 Posted June 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 with names in card text' date=' put "" around them. Field would be just field, no capitals. you just put WIND, not wind attribute. damage step should be Damage Step. fire attribute should just be FIRE. graveyard should be Graveyard. I know most people dont tell you what to fix, so i did[/quote'] Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 Wandering Skeletoni) The effect is too powerful. Either add a Life Point cost or tone it down. Chiro...i) Follow my earlier suggestions. Fire Storm Magei) 'Fire Storm' = 'Firestorm' (It's one word)ii) Effect is very basic. Mermaid Championi) OCG:When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 WATER monster from your Deck with 1500 or less ATK in Attack Position.ii) It's still a very bland effect. PM me if you need any help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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