TwistedFlameApe Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 [align=center]i previously posted these cards to get your opinions. i just created 4 more to add to the collection today so if you havent seen the originals those are here too. plz rate and give critisisms and comments.thank you! [spoiler=Monster Cards]This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of a "Shadowfire" monster. If this card is destroyed and would be sent to the Graveyard, return it to the Deck instead. When this card inflicts battle damage to your opponent, Special Summon 1 "Shadowfire Soldier" from your Deck in face-up Attack Position. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of a "Shadowfire" monster. If this card is destroyed and would be sent to the Graveyard, return it to the Deck instead. If this card is added to your hand from your Deck by a card effect, Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. When this card is Special Summoned, add up to 2 "Shadowfire Imps" from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of a "Shadowfire" monster. If this card is destroyed and would be sent to the Graveyard, return it to the Deck instead. Once per turn you can return 1 card in your hand to your Deck to negate the activation and effect of a Spell Card controlled by your opponent. During the End Phase of a turn you negate the effect of a Spell Card with this effect you can return this card to the Deck and add 1 "Shadowfire" monster from the Deck to your hand. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of a "Shadowfire" monster. If this card is destroyed and would be sent to the Graveyard, return it to the Deck instead. During the End Phase of a turn that this card attacked directly, Special Summon 1 "Shadowfire" monster from your Deck in face-up Attack Position. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of a "Shadowfire" monster. If this card is destroyed and would be sent to the Graveyard, return it to the Deck instead. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. Each time this card inflicts damage to your opponent return 1 card from your Graveyard to the Deck. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of a "Shadowfire" monster. If this card is destroyed and would be sent to the Graveyard, return it to the Deck instead. Destroy this card during the End Phase of the turn this card is Special Summoned unless it was Special Summoned by the effect of "Shadowfire Queen". When this card destroys a monster and sends it to the Graveyard, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the level of the destroyed monster x200. [spoiler=Spell Cards]No Spell Cards at this time. [spoiler=Trap Cards]No Trap Cards at this time. [spoiler=Fusion Monsters]"Shadowfire Soldier" + "Shadowfire Warriror"This card can only be Special Summoned from your Fusion Deck by returning the above cards from your side of the field to the Deck. (You do not use "Polymerization".) If this card would be destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, return it to the Extra Deck instead. Once per turn, you can send 1 monster from the field to the owner's Deck and draw 1 card. If the card you drew is a Monster Card, it is immediately Special Summoned in face-up Attack Position. This card cannot attack the turn this effect is activated. "Shadowfire Sorcerer" + "Shadowfire Imp"This card can only be Special Summoned from your Fusion Deck by returning the above cards from your side of the field to the Deck. (You do not use "Polymerization".) If this card would be destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, return it to the Extra Deck instead. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, no Spell Cards can be activated. If this card attacks a face-down Defense Position monster, destroy the monster immediately with this card's effect without flipping it face-up or applying damage calculation. This card cannot attack directly. "Shadowfire Lord" + "Shadowfire Queen"This card can only be Special Summoned from your Fusion Deck by returning the above cards from your side of the field to the Deck. (You do not use "Polymerization".) If this card would be destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, return it to the Extra Deck instead. Increase the ATK of this card by 300 for each "Shadowfire" monster on the field. This card can attack all monsters your opponent controls once each. If this card attacks directly, send cards from your hand to your Deck for each 1000 points of damage your opponent took. If you cannot, destroy this card. "Shadowfire Archcaster" + "Shadowfire General" + "Shadowfire Emperor"This card can only be Special Summoned from your Fusion Deck by returning the above cards from your side of the field to the Extra Deck. (You do not use "Polymerization".) If this card would be destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, return it to the Extra Deck instead. Increase the ATK of all "Shadowfire" monsters on the field by 200 for each "Shadowfire" monster on the field. When this card declares an attack, change all Defense Position monsters your opponent controls to face-up Attack Posititon. (Flip Effects are not activated at this time.) When this card is destroyed and returns to the Exta Deck, destroy all cards on the field and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of cards destroyed by this effect x500. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 That's awesomely rad dude. I love that Archetype. -Writes it all down and sends it to Konami under my name- Muhahahahaha! -They reply no- Screw them! Lol. Just kidding. Great job man. Expected nothing better than the already amazing from you. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted June 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 That's awesomely rad dude. I love that Archetype. -Writes it all down and sends it to Konami under my name- Muhahahahaha! -They reply no- Screw them! Lol. Just kidding. Great job man. Expected nothing better than the already amazing from you. 10/10 thanks YugiohPro. i rather like the generic effects i came up with for them. as far as Konami goes... ill get you for copyright sooner or later lol. sometimes i wish i actualy could send my cards in. as im sure every1 else does as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 From the looks of it, the thing connecting them (other than having "Shadowfire" monster in the effect.) is summoning monsters from your graveyard in Attack Position. Not a bad idea. ;) 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted June 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 From the looks of it' date=' the thing connecting them (other than having "Shadowfire" monster in the effect.) is summoning monsters from your graveyard in Attack Position. Not a bad idea. ;) 8.5/10[/quote'] this probably sounds very "12 year old girl on a popstar"-ish but i think that just made my day. im really glad (although idk if you read all of them) that there werent any OCG errors lol... i guess this means im getting better. thank you very much DeMeNTeD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
breann101 Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Great job baby Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Great cards as usual. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 as usual? more ppl keep track of my cards than i thought. thanks for the comments ppl Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
everlasting Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 nice cards, the only (slight) problem i saw would be shadowfire soldier's summoning effect, it's pretty much a swarm effect, but if that's what you were going for, good. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 ya theyre kinda quick to get out. im thinking about lowering the ATK to 16 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
everlasting Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 yeah, because othewise its a possible total of 5400 ATK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 good point. il change it. ive been busy tho. i got accepted to 2 really big contests and im currently running 1 so im a bit busy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moham32 Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 good news....i wrote to konami and they could be reading it right now,we might be able to post our cards there!!!!!!!!as fot the cards , they are amazing , but, what do u think of mine,my first card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agaming Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 That's awesomely rad dude. I love that Archetype. -Writes it all down and sends it to Konami under my name- Muhahahahaha! -They reply no- Screw them! Lol. Just kidding. Great job man. Expected nothing better than the already amazing from you. 10/10 From the looks of it' date=' the thing connecting them (other than having "Shadowfire" monster in the effect.) is summoning monsters from your graveyard in Attack Position. Not a bad idea. ;) 8.5/10[/quote']I agree@Moham32 plz don't post cadrs on other peeps' threads Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moham32 Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 good news....i wrote to konami and they could be reading it right now,we might be able to post our cards there!!!!!!!!as fot the cards , they are amazing , but, what do u think of mine,my first card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 thanks for the comments guys. im glad to be finally getting better at this stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moham32 Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 i think u shoud make some fusion cards, maybebut tell me, may konami take my letter siruisely? that would be great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 ya i was thinking the same exact thing. ill work on more cards for the Arche when im not so busy runni ng my contest and im done with the 2 ibg 1s. i have my doubts about the konami thing. they have come up with enough cards by theirselves. what do they need us for? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VideoGamefan12 Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 Wow, I would so buy these, absolutely great! 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted June 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 thanks :) i like hearing that. i guess i really will go on to make fusions and spells and traps then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 Your Shadowfire monsters are among the finest I've seen. The only flaw I feel is on Shadowfire Queen,, who's 2200 atk is too low for lv7. I'd raise it to 2400. 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted June 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 you know something? honestly i had it already at 2400 but i lowered it cuz i didnt know how close i wanted her and Shadowfire Lord. honestly that means a lot coming from you. you were the first person i actually listened to card advice from when i first became a member of this site. thanks editing queen now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 I always see 2400 as the cut off point for lv7 and 8 monsters unless their effect is big enough to compensate, which your Shadowfire Queen's effect was not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kelvinchen Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 good image and strategical effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted June 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 I always see 2400 as the cut off point for lv7 and 8 monsters unless their effect is big enough to compensate' date=' which your Shadowfire Queen's effect was not.[/quote'] im going to keep taht in mind from now on. thanks.and thanks kelvin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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