Introduction + First Card

[Solisi]

So, I joined this comunity with an intent to make Halo cards (lots of people atm are probably sighing with fear..). So, once I joined, I got to work. I have a few already, but heres one I made. (I know the OCG is all wrong, and some pictures will look kinda bad, I blame Google on that respect.) This card took me about 4-8 minutes to make.

[.:Cyrus-The-Virus:.]

ok well your not suppose to use attachments...to post your card, go to where you made it...double click on it...a code will appear below it. copy and paste that code. any questions pm me.

[Solisi]

Ah, sorry, didn't know that. Here's my repost of it.

 

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Also, while I'm at it, here's another two cards, one being the one mentioned in my first card's effect.

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Ok, here's my other four cards - all criticism is accepted as long as it is constructive.

[Max Darkness]

Hello there.

 

i) Awful pictures, see if you can find better ones

ii) DON'T make fake types, it's just annoying...all these would be Machine-Type

ii) The Battlecruiser is underpowered, reduce to Lv. 8

OCG: When this card is Normal Summoned, Special Summon 1 "Phantom" from your Deck.

iii) Reduce Phantom to Lv.4

OCG: When this card is Normal Summoned, draw 1 card. If the card is "Covenant Grunt" or "Covenant Elite", Special Summon it.

iv) Planetary Siege

OCG: You can only activate this card when there are 2 or more "CCS-Battlecruiser" cards on the field. Choose 1 card in your opponent's hand and remove it from play.

 

Rating: 2/10

[Solisi]

Max - Thanks for your criticism. Hopefully by tonight all your changes will be fullfilled, and as I stated im not really good with OCG (threw out all my YGO cards so I cant check), but I should be able to fix them up to look good.

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Alright - I fixed up one of my cards, the CCS-Battlecruiser. Here's what I've recreated.

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Here's another one you mentioned - NOTE: The card name has been changed to Planetary Glassing to better suit the picture.