IceDorago Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 [spoiler=Read this, a little info]Some of the names of characters will be based off other Internet friends of mine. This may come at the beginning of any post where I have new info to give. You may see "summoning in Defense Mode face-up", as this is something from the anime and manga, so do not be shocked. Now, let's begin:Arc 1-Earthbound Gods[spoiler=Chapter 1:The Invitation]Ice walked into his hideout, where he was greeted by his friend, Strike."Ice," he said. "There's a letter for you.""Okay." Ice took the letter and opened it. He read it and was surprised. It read:Ice,We must meet. Meet me at the Daedalus bridge at 8:00 PM, and bring your deck, and three friends , including the Psychic Duelist Kyo.-AnonymousIce showed the letter to Strike. They called Kyo over as well as Shadow, another of their friends."Well," Shadow said. "It probably is a trap, but it seems we should go.""Right," said Ice.They grabbed their Duel Runners and drove to the bridge. A man stood there. "Ah, Ice and Kyo. And these are your two other friends...""I'm Strike and this," Strike pointed to Shadow, "is Shadow.""Nice to meet you," the man said. "I am Jimmy.""So, Jimmy. Why have you brought us here?" Ice asked."Long ago, the first Psychic Duelist made a prophecy, that all God Cards would awaken and one would sense it, and gather a group to fight it."There are only two things: One, to be tested, a Psychic Duelist must be present, so if the group's leader passes the test, they may speak the prophecy. Two, the test is a duel. If you can beat me, you are the One, as I have not been defeated. Ice, you must face the challenge.""Fine," Ice said. "I've got an undefeated record, too.""Duel!" [spoiler=Sidenotes]So, tell me what you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haou Devil 12 Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 It's a little too short of a chapter, but it's good. I'd like to see how the duel goes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceDorago Posted June 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 It's a little too short of a chapter' date=' but it's good. I'd like to see how the duel goes.[/quote'] I know it's short, but that was just more like an introductory chapter. The duel chapters, at least will probably be longer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceDorago Posted June 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 [spoiler=Invented Cards] Cards I invent will be made with card maker. Not always to well, though and it may take a while. [spoiler=Chapter 2]Chapter 2: Duel! The organization revealed!“Wait!”Someone yelled.Ice looked and saw another friend, Bolt, coming towards them.“Hey, Bolt,” Ice said.“Ice, there is no prophecy. All duelists in Satellite had been asked to do this. But there is one thing true, chaos will come. Gods shall arise.”“You,” Jimmy said, “speak too much. Are you a duelist, too?”“Yeah,” said Bolt. “And I’m teaming up with Ice.”“Fine,” Jimmy said. “But give me 8000 Life Points.”“Deal!” yelled Ice.“Good,” said Jimmy. “So now…”“DUEL!” All said.“My turn,” Ice said. “Draw! I summon Sonic Chick in Defense Mode (DEF 300). I end my turn.”“For my turn, I summon Demise Razor (ATK 200) and release it to activate it's effect. But first, I must pay 900 LP (Jimmy LP 7100). Now I Special Summon one card from your Extra Deck. I Summon Stardust Dragon! (ATK 2500)""Stardust!" Ice said."That's right. I know all about your Stardust Dragon, Ice. I must end my turn though.""Draw!" Bolt said. "I play the spell Black Birth. Now I can Special Summon Demise Razor (ATK 200). Now I release Demise Razor to Special Summon one of YOUR monsters but first, two things. I give up 900 LP (Bolt 3100) and use a Quick-Play spell, Reverse Shot, to send stardust back to Ice. Now I Special Summon, from your deck...aha! I play Gaia Knight, the Force of Earth! (ATK 2600). Gaia! Direct attack! Gaia's lance!""Uggghhh..." moaned Jimmy, as his life points went down. (Jimmy 4500) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 Show, don't tell. Give us a lot more description on where they're dueling, what they look like, what the monsters look like, etc. For now, I just imagine them as those department-store mannequins dueling in a pure white room. And that's pretty boring. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceDorago Posted June 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 Show' date=' don't tell. Give us a lot more description on where they're dueling, what they look like, what the monsters look like, etc. For now, I just imagine them as those department-store mannequins dueling in a pure white room. And that's pretty boring.[/quote']Okay, I'll try to do that. If anyone else thinks i can improve something, feel free to tell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceDorago Posted June 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 [spoiler=Chapter 3]Chapter 3: Earthbound Revenge"Turn end," said Bolt."Good job, bolt!" said Ice. "Draw!" Ice looked at his hand. "I play Black Jar! This spell makes us toss out our hands and draw three cards!" All players put their hands into their Duel Disks' graveyard slot. "Any monsters?"Jimmy and Bolt shook their heads."Then I have the luck of the draw! I Special Summon Junk Synchron!" A little man with a scarf appeared. "Speed Warrior!" A robot-looking warrior appeared from the card. "And finally...Frequency Magician!" A Magician appeared , grinning. He was dressed in long robes and a hat. "I tune Junk Synchron and Speed Warrior to Synchro Summon Junk Warrior!" A robotic man with two flowing scarves appeared and pushed his fist forward. "Now for the main act! I tune Frequency Magician (2 stars) with Sonic Chick (1 star) and Junk Warrior (5 stars). I Synchro Summon my ace! Stardust Dragon, come forth!"A white dragon appeared and screeched. (Stardust Dragon ATK 2500)"Stardust dragon! Direct Attack! Shooting Sonic!" (Jimmy 2000)"M...my turn..." stammered Jimmy. "I set one face down card and play a spell, Earthbound War Call. I Special Summon Earthbound Servant-Jiru (ATK 1200)" A spider appeared snapping it's pincers. Now I activate Sort of Heaven. By discarding the top two cards of my deck, I add the next card to my hand. Fate gives me what I need! I Release Jiru to Advance Summon Earthbound Apprentice-Thunderbreak." A man in black armor appeared and zapped Stardust with an Electric Shock. (ATK 2200) "I reduce Stardust's attack by 500 thanks to this card's ability. I attack now!"Stardust was destroyed (Ice 3800)"Turn end""My turn," said Bolt. "I summon...Gagagigo." A crocodile that stood on two legs appeared. (ATK 1850) "Gaia, attack!" Thunderbreak was destroyed. (Jimmy 1600) "Gagaigo, direct attack!""Trap!" Jimmy yelled. "Lifeline! If my LP is about to be wiped out, I can stay in with 1." (Jimmy 1)"Turn end," said Bolt.I need a monster Ice thought. Deck, come through for me, please! "Draw! I summon Forteress Warrior! attack!" The rocky monster struck. "GAME OVER!" yelled Ice. (Jimmy 0)"W...what...your friend...said. It was true. It was a trick." Jimmy dissolved into dust.To be continued... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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