Rucario Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 Black Luster History in Cards. None of these pictures belong to me. I found out that it's possible to see the effects without text below it so I removed it for the contents of the Pages. Please Comment and Rate. [align=center]There was once a Weak Clan by the Name of Black. Many other clans attacked this Clan and almost wiped it out but the survivors had a Plan, they made a Ritual to Create the "Luster Sword".They used the Luster Sword to wipe out entire Armies but one Country was saved by the Sacrifice of it's Leader. The Country was so angry so they caught a Dragon and fused it with same Material used to Create the Luster Sword. The dragon with it's mighty powers then wiped out half of the clan. One Member of the Clan then sacrificed his Life to annihilate the Dragon for Good. This left the Country defenseless. The Black Clan then used multiple Rituals and made many Black Luster Swords and used their Power to wipe out the Entire Country. The Clan was then forever known as The Unstoppable Black Luster.......................[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueEyesShiningDragon4Z Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 you need to work on your ocg/grammerinteresting idea though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rucario Posted June 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 interesting idea though Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 Interesting idea, may I suggest writing the actual story under the cards. I mean, I guess we could use guesswork based on the card effects, that might be what you meant, but knowing the story and understanding where the effects fit in may help. Decent and interesting cards. I'll take a guess on the story. once upon a time, there was a soldier who could slaughter all (Page 2). However he met his match with the Luster Dragon (page 3). Luster Dragon was killed, but it still managed to wipe out Black Luster (page 4 sacrifices it to destroy a monster). ...And the fifth lost me, he somehow survives and becomes epic? So yeah, interesting idea. If I recall there was a somewhat similar thing with the Gagagigo thing, someone made them into effect monsters to help with the story. Pretty neat. Anyway, good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 hah good job 8/10 because pics for 1 card isn't original. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rucario Posted June 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 I added the Page's Contents. Black Luster Sodier - Envoy of the Beginning has the effect to remove from play 1 Monster. You could say it removed from play an entire Army who act up as one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CallTrain Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 the idea is good...I liked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rucario Posted June 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 Oh Come On! Sombody?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 you cant just activate a trap card from your deck. let me make a suggestion. make page 1 a trap and the traps taht follow it spell cars. kind of like a "destiny Board" set up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rucario Posted June 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 you cant just activate a trap card from your deck. let me make a suggestion. make page 1 a trap and the traps taht follow it spell cars. kind of like a "destiny Board" set up.Even though you can activate a Trap Card from your just like that with Jetroid, I still just made it like a Destiny Board. Though this one is more effective in the first four Pages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rucario Posted June 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 ....................................... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ugallian Posted June 20, 2009 Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 Very very good take on Black Luster Soldier.9.5/10 (need a better page 1 pic) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rucario Posted July 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2009 Humpity BUMPity sat on a 10000000000000 Story High Wall. Humpity BUMPity fell off the 10000000000000 Story High Wall. And Died. The End. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Fox Tamer Posted July 3, 2009 Report Share Posted July 3, 2009 Good Idea. I suggest that you make the first card only sacrifice 500 Life points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rucario Posted July 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mazerrick Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 Its a nice idea but work on your OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skytin Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 Idea is very interesting! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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