dragoncreator12 Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 These are my first cards please rate!:D I think the names could use a little work... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guy22 Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 they're ok i guess. the only issues i have are that haos dragon has no background, and they're a bit overpowered. but alright for a newbie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 Haos Dragon's effect is a little too OPed. A constant Pot of Greed effect is something everyone would go after. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monkeyman13 Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 these cards are pretty cool. How do you post cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heimster009 Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 my signature card!!!tell me if its any good... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 your sig card is far too OPed, though the pic certainly fits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heimster009 Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 thanx!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 I'd post your sig card in another thread, but you have to tune its power down Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 Quite good for a new member. A few suggestions: Slizeri) You could turn this in a Fusion, it would add some variaty to the set.ii) An overused picture.iii) You don't need the 'while on the field' part of the effect. Haos Dragoni) No backgroundii) The effect is a bit too powerful Dark Dragoni) ...Such an overused name and pic...change both pleaseii) Give it an effect Dragon Xi) Don't make fake typesii) Your OCG is all wrong. PM me if you need help 6/10 500 FANTASTIC POSTS!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hirikiri Inaghe Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 cool cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 these cards are pretty cool. How do you post cards? Although technically spam...I'll let this one go: i) Go to the Card Maker Sectionii) Click on the card and wait for the string of letters and numbers to appeariii) Copy and paste that into a thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 Newbie cards indeed... -Emperor DragonImage: Correct.OCG: Bad, very bad. Multiples OCG errors. Fixe:This card can only be Tribute Summoned by tributing 1 "Haos Dragon" and 1 "Dark Dragon" you control. Increase this card ATK and DEF by 500 for each Dragon-Type monsters in your Graveyard. Effect: Underpowered. Meaning that's very weak for an "Emperor" dragon. >x> Try a little more original, kk? Dragon XMajor error: Don't create new type or even try it, it's in others that you put that.Oh and bad OCG. Cards don't drain ATK for other cards. Before I give my final mark, avoid creating vanillas (normal cards). Overall: 3.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heimster009 Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 i improved it a bit.like u said ragnarok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 i improved it a bit.like u said ragnarok But you didn't post it in a different thread! Remove it from here, and post it in a different thread.Or put it in your sig. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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