Shadowgale16 Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 It probrobly sucks, but I havn't been here long. Please tell me if I am doing something wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 [align=center]Here's the correct OCG (official card grammar) This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. When this card is successfully Summoned, increase the DEF of this card by 500. Simple. I really don't see any use for this card but it's decent for a first. 7/10[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 take out "Successfully" change "defence" to "DEF"_____________________________________ It's not too bad. The effect just needs to be more original. Maybe add some more things to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 why boost its def by 500? I'd rather boost its atk, even if it's by a smaller amount 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
al9090 Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. When this card is successfully Summoned, increase the DEF of this card by 500.OCG fix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. When this card is successfully Summoned' date=' increase the DEF of this card by 500.OCG fix[/quote']-_- you just copied my fix...-_- you just copied my fix... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tabris Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 You're right: it sucks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowgale16 Posted June 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 Sorry. But it WAS my first card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iSTIX Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Exactly what they said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. When this card is successfully Summoned' date=' increase the DEF of this card by 500.OCG fix[/quote'] Thought u werent allowed to post just OCG fixs?? Nice card for a beginner , (well I cant say that , I'm one aswell) 7 / 10. Oh another thing , dont put ":" in card names. Instead of "Ninja Girl: Dana" just do "Ninja Girl Dana" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 OK card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 good card 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SuperMidget #1 Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 that was good for a beginner but u should change the def to lower 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Great card for a beginner 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
troop4921 Posted November 21, 2009 Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 i think its actually really good i mean better than mine but wow keep going________________________________________________________________ (\__/)(='.'=)This is Bunny. Copy and paste him into your sig (")_(")to help him gain world domination. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SeantheDuelist Posted November 21, 2009 Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 I'm new to this. How do you post cards on here? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Oleon~ Posted November 21, 2009 Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 Good for your FIRST card. Nice going. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Läufer Posted November 21, 2009 Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 Need OCG fix really bad.Effect is OVP'd. However, you're new. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SeantheDuelist Posted November 21, 2009 Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moppmoppmopp Posted November 21, 2009 Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 Since you already started reading you cant stop. My name is Kalena. I have black hair, and green eyes. I am 13. I was abused my whole life. I have no ears or nose, because my parents chopped them of with a rusty fork. I am dead. I will show up in your room in 13 days and kill you by chopping off your body parts with a rusty fork unless you repost this on 5 pages. THIS IS NO JOKE!!!! If you do, something good will happen to you within 13 days. If you don't believe this, just wait and see... and it is very hard too not summon it sucseefully. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted November 21, 2009 Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 Click on the Card in the card maker and the link to it comes up under it and put in between[/img]. A little advice vanilla cards aren't supported on this forum Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SeantheDuelist Posted November 21, 2009 Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 does no one know how to help anyone around here?thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=^.^= Posted November 21, 2009 Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 Who said vilinals arent suported sure people dont like them but Gene-Warped Warwolf is a vilina and alot of peop;e use him and no set is compleate withought them like the E-Heros or what not Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Läufer Posted November 21, 2009 Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 [/img] Don't post on other people's thread.That's called spamming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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