gudari88 Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Hi guys i was making Desert monsters and here are there: Plz RATE Any Battle Damage your opponent takes when they attack this monster is doubled. When this card is Special Summoned the controller of this card draws 1 card. This card is unaffected by the effects of trap cards. When this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard, the controler of this card draws 1 card. If the only cards on your opponent's side of the field are Defense Position Monster Cards, This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. My Signature is a Desert Monster Too. 1 Thing should i keep doing Desert monsters?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Desert Worms effect is the same as Black Tyrano's. Other than that they're pretty good. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gudari88 Posted June 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Yes is the same XDD, but i thinked that will be a good effect for a monster with 4 stars Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Yes it will. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gorm13 Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 The effects are not very original and I don't see them working well together as an Archetype (not that anyone said they should).The pictures fit the desert theme.OCG is good, but not perfect.One last thing: Make sure that different cards have different set numbers. Not always "VSC-EN009" (the number in this is what should change with every card in a set). I take this as a minor mistake.All in all: 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gudari88 Posted June 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 thanks Gorm13 i tinked that the set numbers had to be always the same (dont know why XD)Thanks for your advice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 They don't really seem to work together. :| Perhaps make it so that Desert Worm only inflicts half the original damage? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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