Time: Wandering Mage (Trap Monster attempt)

[~Wright~]

Hello Again! As always, I am open to advice and critique! Oh, and I used Embodiment of Apophis as a guideline (I was careful with the OCG, but there will still most likely be errors) I originally posted this in Other Cards, but, I grew more confident and posted it here! So, without further ado, here we are!

 

 

Lore: Activate only during the Battle Phase. Pay 500 Life Points and increase your opponent's Life Points by 500. This card is treated as a Normal Monster Card (Spellcaster-Type/FIRE/Level 8/ ATK 3000/Def 3000 ) and is Special Summoned to one of your Monster Card Zones. (This card is still treated as a Trap Card) During the End Phase in which this card was activated, it is removed from play. During your opponent's 2nd Standby Phase after this card was activated, it is set face-down in a Spell and Trap Card Zone on your side of the field.

 

Image credit goes to Google Image Search, as always!

 

Again, please give advice, critique, rate, etc

[Max Darkness]

This is too high a level for a Trap Monster. They don't go above Lv.5 I think.

Also, it has an effect. Therefore it cannot be treated as a Normal Monster.

 

Good attempt though.

[AbbatonStrikes]

Max the Card Metal Reflect Slime is Level 10 Trap monster & Embodiment of Apophis (If thats spelt right lol!) is classed as a Normal Monster too.

[Spartan919]

Neat card. 7/10

[Max Darkness]

Max the Card Metal Reflect Slime is Level 10 Trap monster & Embodiment of Apophis (If thats spelt right lol!) is classed as a Normal Monster too.

 

i) Oh yeah...

 

ii) But "Embodiment of Apophis" has no further effect after it's Summoned. This does. Consider "Apophis" and "Zoma the Spirit" (another Trap Monster)

 

"Apophis": You can only activate this card during a Main Phase. After activation' date=' this card is treated as a [b']Normal Monster Card[/b] (Reptile-Type/EARTH/Level 4/ATK 1600/DEF 1800), and is Special Summoned to your Monster Card Zone. (This card is also still treated as a Trap Card.)

 

"Zoma": After activation, Special Summon this card in Defense Position; it is treated as a Effect Monster Card (Zombie-Type/DARK/Level 4/ATK 1800/DEF 500). If this card is destroyed by battle, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of the monster that destroyed it. (This card is also still treated as a Trap Card.)

 

Zoma is counted as an effect monster because it has an effect. So this should be counted as one too.

[~Wright~]

But THIS effect doesn't refer to the monster, but rather to the card itself. Per se? And, I think, on a decisive note, a monster's effect would not say "During the End Phase in which this card is activated"

[ragnarok1945]

Not bad for a trap monster, 500 LP loss and opponent's 500 LP gain is minimal

 

9/10

[Max Darkness]

But THIS effect doesn't refer to the monster' date=' but rather to the card itself. Per se? And, I think, on a decisive note, a monster's effect would not say "During the End Phase in which this card is activated"

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But because it's a Trap Monster, it will; since it's both a monster and a Trap Card.

[lacikus]

Pic is overused but you are new so I don't get that in order good card 8/10