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[align=center]Immersive virtual reality isn’t just a myth. In fact, it’s already happened. A supercomputer hidden in an abandoned factory in France is the pathway to Lyoko, a computerized world built as a safe haven for the creator and his daughter. However, the place was overrun by a malevolent force known as XANA, and only through the combined efforts of a hacker and his friends from the nearby Kadec Academy did it become possible for XANA to be defeated. After that, the computer was shut down, but things have flared up again…

 

Signs of activity have seemingly come from the supercomputer again, after 10 long years. It seems like an extremist country that is well-versed in technology is using Lyoko in order to wage its war against the world. Nobody knows this connection because of the terrorist’s actions, except for you and your friends at the academy. Can you dive back into Lyoko to save the day? Or will everything go up in smoke?

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[/align][spoiler=Before We Start]1) This is a canon Code: LYOKO RP, set 10 years after the events in the show's finale. However, no major canon characters will be appearing.

2) This RP is brought to you by The Beasts of X.A.N.A, YCM's first (and I believe only) Code: LYOKO club. We ask that you join the club and read the Wikipedia article on the series to get familiarized. Otherwise, we will not accept any applications until you do. (It really doesn't take too long.)

3) Although I created this thread, Kira has as much jurisdiction in this thread as I do. Therefore, he can ban you from the thread if you're acting up when I'm not on. So don't. ;D

4) This RP uses the advanced roleplaying rules, as well as all other applicable RP and site rules. Keep this in mind when applying.

5) This is just a side project to the main thing, which is the club. If you're going to join the club just to get to the RP, I recommend you don't. It's usually not a good sign for you or your application.

6) The password for the application is "scanner".

 

[spoiler=[s]Application - Character[/s] (currently not accepting)]

[b][u]Real Life[/u][/b]
[b]Name:[/b] {something that could be seen in real-life}
[b]Year:[/b] {freshman, sophomore, junior, senior}
[b]Gender:[/b]
[b]Ethnicity:[/b]
[b]Appearance:[/b] {at least 1 well-written paragraph, no pictures}
[b]Personality:[/b] {at least 1 well-written paragraph}
[b]Relationships:[/b] {how they interact with other player characters}
[b]Skill with Using Supercomputer:[/b] {low, medium, high}

[b][u]Lyoko[/u][/b]
[b]Lyoko Appearance:[/b] {at least 1 well-written paragraph; think video games}
[b]Focus:[/b] {speed, strength, stamina, power, technical}
[b]Weapon:[/b] {only 1}
[b]Abilities:[/b] {3 max}
[b]Vehicle:[/b] {should have the "Over-" prefix; 2-3 decently-descriptive sentences}

[b][u]Additional[/u][/b]
[b]RP Sample:[/b] {at least 1 decent paragraph, no script-speak, can be from anything}
[b]Rules Password:[/b]

 

[spoiler=Application - Others]We're looking for additional monsters and sectors to use. This is completely optional, but you can make as many as you'd like.

[spoiler=Sector Application]

[b]Name:[/b] {we're using Latin, so make sure to post an accurate name and a translation}
[b]Landscape Description:[/b] {at least 1 decent paragraph}
[b]Possible Hazards:[/b] {just make a list of 2-3}
[b]Found Monsters:[/b] {just examples, real or made-up}
[b]Creator:[/b] {put your username here}

 

[spoiler=Monster Application]

[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Description:[/b] {at least 1 paragraph; include approximate size}
[b]Where Eye of XANA Is:[/b] {that's its weak spot; include size}
[b]Weaponry:[/b] {2-3 max}
[b]Possible Locations:[/b] {just a list, can be real or made-up}
[b]Creator:[/b] {put your username here}

 

 

[spoiler=Accepted Items][spoiler=Accepted Characters][spoiler=.:Lawliet:. - Kent Mishima]

Real Life

Name: Kent Mishima

Year: Sophomore

Gender: M

Appearance: {at least 1 well-written paragraph, no pictures} - About 5''7', 1 silver eye, 1 red. Has black hair that spikes outwards, and is relatively pale. Is not buff, but his arms aren't toothpicks either. Wears sunglasses half the time and is usually sitting or laying down. He is usually found wearing a black t-shirt and some knee-torn jeans.

Personality: Kent is pretty laid-back and tries to be cool. He cracks jokes and you can consider him a less-energetic, modern-day Odd. He loves to be outside, but only to get some sun and relax. He is very popular in his mind, although the new LYOKO Warriors are his only friends. He usually, when inside, plays video games or is in class. He doesn't listen to any music, and especially hates rap.

Skill with Using Supercomputer: Medium

Ethnicity Japanese-American

Relationships: He can get along with anyone, as long as they don't break their promises toward him, then he will feel betrayed and stop talking to them for a while.

 

Lyoko

Lyoko Appearance: He gets a vest, hooded, that protects him from attacks in that area. He also gets claws on both hands that are actually gloves that aren't very thick and look more like a black dog's paw and that retract, but increase his strength. He gets glowing red eyes that allow him to see up to 1000 more feet away than the average human and able to see through fog, mist, etc.

Focus: Balanced, but mainly strength

Weapon: His claws

Abilities: His sight (above), telekinesis (only objects up to 10 ft. away)

Vehicle: Overcycle (Like the overbike, but 2 wheels) It is virtually just a flying motorcycle... It is black with red streaks on the side, and is about 2 and a half feet tall.

[spoiler=.Mirage. - Shuang Hui Li]

Real Life

Name: Shuang hui Li (Meaning I think it is Open Minded, Li is just extra)

Year: Freshmen

Gender: Male

Ethnicity: Chinese

Appearance: Shaung Hui is an average height for a person with black hair going down to his neck. His eyes are a dark brown color with a skin tone from the South Region of China. The skin tone is a dark tan. He wears a black jacket with the sleeves going down to his elbows with blue jeans with rips going down the sides of the pants legs. Then with a red shirt usually with some Chinese Symbol on it under his black jacket.

Personality: He tries to examine things out before doing any major actions. He doesn’t want anything bad to happen as he thinks about the outcomes. He is out going if he wants to be, but tends to stay in the back.

Relationships: He can get along with almost anyone, but get him pissed off he will hold a long grudge that probably won’t break.

Skill with Using Supercomputer: Little to none

 

Lyoko

Lyoko Appearance: Shaung’s hair is tied in a ponytail with a white ribbon holding it together. He wears a long, white mages robe on the back of it with the Chinese Symbol of “Fear”. There is a cut within the bottom half of the robe from the bottom to waste portion revealing white pants tied with bandages around his ankles. He wears red shows with the tip pointing up.

Focus: Stamina

Weapon: A wooden like staff, with a blue orb at the top of the shaft. It is as high as the chest of Shaung, thin around the bottom getting fatter toward the top.

Abilities:

Levitation: Using his staff the blue orb starts to glow with almost anything trapped in its beam will start to move.

Terror Sphere: A black colored orb which can be produced out of nowhere. The sphere can be used to defend the user, when an attack hits the sphere the attack will disappear. Then another use it can be thrown at an enemy target.

Vehicle: Name "Over-Bite" A spider looking bike that has red legs with black for the rest of the body. At the mouth of the venomous month a small stun laser is placed.

 

[spoiler=galesonic - Brandon Mitchell]Real Life

Name: Brandon Mitchell

Year: Sophomore

Gender:Male

Ethnicity: Haitian

Appearance: about 5'7. Short black hair, almost making him look bald. He has dark brown/black eyes and wears glasses. He is always seen wearing a brown or black hoodie with a skull on the back, blue denim jeans, and either white basketball sneakers or blue in-line skates

Personality: Smart but at times, really lazy. He can be easilly bored though he could never pay attention to one thing at a time. He usually would act what people would call 'crazy or 'weird', but to him is really normal

Relationships: He would stay quiet, but he would usually tries to be their friend.

Skill with Using Supercomputer: medium

 

Lyoko

Lyoko Appearance:He wears a black jumpsuit with blue neon lighint around the back and the arms and red lighting on the back in the shape of a skull. his hair is grown and spiked and has markings on his face: a red marking coming down from his left eye and a blue marking coming from the top of his nose.

Focus: Speed and stamina

Weapon: broadsword

Abilities:

1. Boomerang Blade: Basically what it means.

2. Severing Slash: a slash that can reach far lenghts, until its limit of 150 meters

3. Sword Wheel: spins his sword either on the ground or in the air to block attacks or attack enemies

Vehicle: None

 

[spoiler=Pikachu - Jack Yu]Real Life

Name: Jack Yu

Year: Junior

Gender: Male

Ethnicity: Chinese

Appearance: A tall 5"9 boy with straight black hair and brown eyes. He wears a green polo shirt, blue jeans and trainers. He also has a blue digital watch that acts like a telephone 9which he could talk to his relatives). He is rather strong, but not much muscles can be seen.

Personality: Being a new student, Jack is a rather shy boy at first sight. At the beginning, he cannot cope well with others. Over a short period of time, he can get use to it and make good friendships. His leadership skills are surprisingly good and is courageous in different scenarios.

Relationships: Although he is rather shy, he could become quite popular within a few months. He currently has no girlfriends in this school, but he does have a girlfriend in his other school, Monica, which he keeps in touch with privately.

Skill with Using Supercomputer: Because his dad is an IT manager, he has some basic knowledge on working with computers and, of course, hi-tech supercomputers. he can easily scan his friends to Lyoko and devirtualize then as well. Although he can do those basic skills, he can't do much else.

 

Lyoko

Lyoko Appearance: A strong warrior having the power of kung-fu. He has a green and black ninja outfit, but no mask. The ninja outfit is quite tight. The concept is that his chest, knee and arms are in green, and the rest is black. He wears a green power band which can come in good use (to direct wind and so on). He wears black gloves, but they are covered by his weapon.

Focus: His focus is on speed and power. His agility is very high, and so is his accuracy at aiming at the XANA eye.

Weapon: His weapon is a pair of moonblades, a weapon which Jack could hold on in the middle like a spear. the handle is at the middle of the weapon and has two curving blades at each end of it. He has one in each hand (one to defend, one to attack. Both can be used to attack if necessary.) The weapon is quite light, which gives a boost to Jack while fighting. When attacking the enemy, he usually slashes his target, making a mark of a 'X'.

Abilities:

Fireblades: His blades has the power to be heated, increasing his damage by a lot. He has two extra ways of using it. Firstly, he can use it as a range attack, by slashing the air. When he does that, the heat is released in a orange crescent shape and can attack the monster from quite a distance. This is one of the only ways he can attack a flying monster.

 

His second way is to build up more energy and charge at the enemy (think of Chidori, but with fire). He slashes them at an enemy, immediately devirtualizing them. This, however, can only be used once in one Lyoko trip.

 

Blink (name comes from Warcraft): One of the reasons he is a strong warrior. When close to an enemy, he can warp behind them (the range is a maximum of 3 meters) almost immediately. When doing so, he could attack from behind. he can only do it once. Another use of it is to get away from dangerous situations.

Vehicle: *Currently can't think of one. If possible, can he have no vehicles?*

[spoiler=Rinne - Nikolai Korolyov]Real World

Name: Nikolai Korolyov

Year: Sophomore

Gender: Male

Ethnicity: Russian

Appearance: At first glance, Nikolai almost seems to emulate the cold northern country from where he comes. He has dark blue eyes that seem sharpened and homed on what he is currently looking at, pale white skin, and darkish-gray hair that is slightly long and tied back in a loose ponytail. There is a faint, but still noticeable scar stretching across the back of his neck, which he tries to conceal with white collared shirts, often worn open over gray undershirts. He also likes to wear plain black jeans and slip-on sneakers, just for ease of wear.

Personality: Reserved and peaceful, Nikolai doesn’t go out of his way to do much, preferring in real life to keep to himself and get his studies done as a priority. The only ones he really talks with are the other Lyokons, and even then he prefers to stay quiet. He subscribes to the theory that actions speak louder than words, and usually tries to stand up for those who are being picked on, although this usually is ignored because of him just being a sophomore.

Relationships: When it comes to other people, Nikolai friendly, but somewhat secretive. He’s very choosy with his words, trying to not reveal much about himself or offend anything. He likes being somewhat lonesome, an image that fits him fine.

Skill with Using Supercomputer: Low-medium.

 

Lyoko

Lyoko Appearance: On Lyoko, Nikolai’s standard outfit is a tight navy-blue tanktop that exposes his stomach and abdominals, a pair of navy forearm guards with sliver armor, and matching fingerless gloves with silver backs. The tanktop has a white circle on the front, with a black icon in the center that resembles a howling wolf. He wears a pair of long loose navy pants with light grey hems, and uses a long flowing light-blue sash as a belt. A pair of simple blue sandals completes the ensemble. Two light-blue fang-like markings also appear under Nikolai’s eyes.

Focus: Speed

Weapon: A long iron chain with a sharp, large diamond-shaped knife on the end. The knife can split out into a grappling hook to allow Nikolai to grab far-away objects and reel them in. He can also hold the knife at the end without using the chain to fight in close combat.

Abilities:

Surge – By shooting the knife into an enemy and gripping the other end of the chain, Nikolai can sent a bolt of blue electrical energy down the chain that shocks anything it hits. This is the standard extra ability that he uses.

Storm – Spinning the chain out in a circle produces a large ring of blue electricity from the knife end, which Nikolai uses to act as a barrier of sorts.

Sight – Nikolai has a mental “radar” of sorts which allows him to locate anyone else on Lyoko via telepathy. This can only be used in very short bursts, though.

Vehicle: None.

[spoiler=Sakuya Izayoi - Ilse Abendroth]

Real Life

Name: Ilse Abendroth (I suck at names, change to whatever you like.)

Year: Freshman

Gender: Female

Ethnicity: German

Appearance: Ilse dons a long, bright orange jacket that is much larger then her normal size. It drags down almost to her knees, which really isn't saying much, considering she's only 4 feet tall at the maximum. She also wears dark pants and a necklace in the shape of a cross. Her hair is short and dark.

Personality:She's very religious, and would stand by her beliefs even if it meant her her life. She attends church on Sunday mornings, and recites daily prayer before sleep. She's also generally very loyal. Some might describe her as being a 'goody two shoes'. She generally likeds to try her best and help show people the correct path to God.

Relationships: She's generally timid and meek, but not afraid to talk to people. Although, the fact that she is constantly mocked for being religious doesn't help. She has very few friends because of her beliefs.

Skill with Using Supercomputer: Low. She dislikes technology.

 

Lyoko

Lyoko Appearance: In Lyoko, she's garbed in a white robe with various silver and gold necklaces in the shape of crosses. A large, diamond encrusted cross easily stands out from the others. A White, fingerless gloves are on each of her hands, with a black cross on the back of her palm. Her eyes are protected by a small screen, just big enough to cover her eyes.

Focus: Power.

Weapon: A very broad sword. The left half is black, while the right is white. There is a single blood-red cross growing down the middle of the blade. Contrary to it's width, the sword is quite small in length.

Abilities:

Purifying Light; Arrows of light shoot out of her back, any foes hit are paralyzed for a short amount of time.

Formidable Faith; An aura of light surrounds her, and she steadily regains her strength. The aura cannot be broken while in use, and any enemies hitting it take damage. Lasts for a very short amount of time.

Vehicle: N/A

 

 

[spoiler=Created Sectors][spoiler=Frigus]Name: Frigus

Landscape Description: There is nothing but ice. There are stalagmites of ice everywhere you look. There are about 5 towers in this area. There is no virtual sea, although with all the ice, you can always slip. If you fall hard enough, you lose Life Points.

Possible Hazards: Falling ice, slipping

Found Monsters: Blocks, Tarantulas, Kankrelats

Creator: .:Lawliet:.

[spoiler=Imber]Name: Imber (Rain)

Landscape Description: The land scape is a jungle region covered in heavy bushes and trees. The grass is thick and heavy preventing most hazards that are well hidden within it. The trees are over hundreds feet tall with many vines hanging all over them. Many streams run through the jungle with one major river running down the middle.

Possible Hazards:

Heavy rain fall they pours down really fast weakening anything which it hits.

Trees or vines fall over randomly without warning.

Found Monsters: Odonata

Creator: .Mirage.

[spoiler=Lacuna]Name: Lacuna (Latin for "empty space")

Landscape Description: The best way to describe this area is most likely it's name. Lacuna is a replica of outer space and the stars, and is very difficult to navigate due to this. Platforms are few and far between, and gravity is centralized around the multiple small "planetoids" hovering in the void, which are usually very barren and only have Towers as major landmarks. Monsters have taken to floating in the void, instead of walking. The digital sea takes the form of large, non-sucking "black holes", which people can be propelled into with enough force.

Possible Hazards:

-One false step, and you could find yourself floating away...

-Miniature stars are present, and they devirtualize immediately upon contact, draining life from anything around them due to the heat.

Found Monsters: Drifters, Blackies

Creator: Rinne

 

[spoiler=Tempestas]Name: Tempestas (Storm)

Landscape Description: A unique sector in the world of Lyoko with no solid land masses to be seen. From top to bottom the whole sector is covered in many clouds dense with dust cutting away from regular vision. Certain points are clear of clouds, but dangers await within the sector. In the almost impossible to find center there lies a single tower within the several caverns of the only island in the sector.

Possible Hazards:

Possible lighting storms which can do massive damage with anything it comes into contact with. The dense clouds can block almost all sight with creatures that can attack at anytime. Strong winds that force people to move with the wind.

Found Monsters: Attonbitus, Ventus, Levis

Creator: .Mirage.

 

[spoiler=Created Monsters]

[spoiler=Avion]Name:Ventus

Description: Only a single one will appear at a time with a wing span of 20 feet long. The size of the blue colored, winged beast is about a size of single story building. The beast has a huge beak that is as sharp as a spear head which can pierce anything and monstrous roar that can be heard for miles. The creature has no eyes anywhere on its body.

Where Eye of XANA Is: On the chest of the bird creature.

Weaponry: A monstrous roar which can push back anyone or anything caught in the burst. Huge wings which can move the beast at high speeds and can do massive damage to anything that hits its sharp beak.

Possible Locations: Tempestas

Creator: .Mirage.

[spoiler=Odonata]Name: Odonata

Description: The size of the dragonfly beast is about the size of an adult male. With two rows of wings which can flap at high speeds. A long tail with about 3 feets long at the end with a spike blade. The average Odonata is greenish, yellowish color. Usually travel in a group of 6 with a leader Odonata with a darker green then the average Odonata. The attack groups get up close range to do major damage to their prey.

Where Eye of XANA Is: The eye is located on top of the head of Odonata.

Weaponry:

Venomous fangs when bit by it the victim loses feeling in the effect area.

A bladed tail which can be swung to block weak laser attacks.

Possible Locations: Forest, Imber.

Creator: .Mirage.

[spoiler=Schlange]Name: Schlange

Description: A large snake-like monster with a chrome plating on the back on its head. It has a rather large mouth for trapping it's enemies and can use it's rattle on it's tail to disorient the opponent's vision and/or hearing for sneak attacks, though it wears off pretty fast. The Schlange is partly fast, but has a really high intellegence in order to be able to fight alone.

Where Eye of XANA Is: On the top of the chrome covering

Weaponry:

1. Rattle to disorient enemy slightly

2. Two sets of lasers on the eyes of the Schlange

3. Mouth to trap enemies, but doesn't damage them.

Possible Locations: Imbur

Creator: galesonic

 

 

 

[spoiler=Banned Members]

[spoiler=Recommended Links]

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-127885.html - The thread for the club which you need to join for this RP, "Beasts of X.A.N.A."

http://www.eudict.com/ - A good reference for Latin words.

http://editthis.info/Code_WIKI/Main_Page - A very-well organized wiki for the series.

 

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Real Life

 

Name: - Kent Mishima

 

Year: {freshman, sophomore, junior, senior} - Sophomore

 

Gender: - M

 

Appearance: {at least 1 well-written paragraph, no pictures} - About 5''7', 1 silver eye, 1 red. Has black hair that spikes outwards, and is relatively pale. Is not buff, but his arms aren't toothpicks either. Wears sunglasses half the time and is usually sitting or laying down. He is usually found wearing a black t-shirt and some knee-torn jeans.

 

Personality: {at least 1 well-written paragraph} - Kent is pretty laid-back and tries to be cool. He cracks jokes and you can consider him a less-energetic, modern-day Odd. He loves to be outside, but only to get some sun and relax. He is very popular in his mind, although the new LYOKO Warriors are his only friends. He usually, when inside, plays video games or is in class. He doesn't listen to any music, and especially hates rap.

 

Skill with Using Supercomputer: {low, medium, high} - Medium

 

Ethnicity - Japanese-American

 

Relationships: {how they interact with other player characters} - He can get along with anyone, as long as they don't break their promises toward him, then he will feel betrayed and stop talking to them for a while.

 

Lyoko

 

Lyoko Appearance: {at least 1 well-written paragraph; think video games} - He gets a vest, hooded, that protects him from attacks in that area. He also gets claws on both hands that are actually gloves that aren't very thick and look more like a black dog's paw and that retract, but increase his strength. He gets glowing red eyes that allow him to see up to 1000 more feet away than the average human and able to see through fog, mist, etc.

 

Focus: {speed, strength, stamina, power, technical} - Balanced, but mainly strength

 

Weapon: {only 1} His claws

 

Abilities: {3 max} His sight (above), telekinesis (only objects up to 10 ft. away)

 

Vehicle: {should have the “Over-“ prefix, is optional} Overcycle (Like the overbike, but 2 wheels) It is virtually just a flying motorcycle... It is black with red streaks on the side, and is about 2 and a half feet tall.

 

[spoiler=[b]Rules Password:[/b]] Scanner

 

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Real Life

Name: Shuang hui Li (Meaning I think it is Open Minded, Li is just extra)

Year: Freshmen

Gender: Male

Ethnicity: Chinese

Appearance: Shaung Hui is an average height for a person with black hair going down to his neck. His eyes are a dark brown color with a skin tone from the South Region of China. The skin tone is a dark tan. He wears a black jacket with the sleeves going down to his elbows with blue jeans with rips going down the sides of the pants legs. Then with a red shirt usually with some Chinese Symbol on it under his black jacket.

Personality: He tries to examine things out before doing any major actions. He doesn’t want anything bad to happen as he thinks about the outcomes. He is out going if he wants to be, but tends to stay in the back.

Relationships: He can get along with almost anyone, but get him pissed off he will hold a long grudge that probably won’t break.

Skill with Using Supercomputer: Little to none

 

Lyoko

Lyoko Appearance: Shaung’s hair is tied in a ponytail with a white ribbon holding it together. He wears a long, white mages robe on the back of it with the Chinese Symbol of “Fear”. There is a cut within the bottom half of the robe from the bottom to waste portion revealing white pants tied with bandages around his ankles. He wears red shows with the tip pointing up.

Focus: Stamina

Weapon: A wooden like staff, with a blue orb at the top of the shaft. It is as high as the chest of Shaung, thin around the bottom getting fatter toward the top.

Abilities:

Levitation: Using his staff the blue orb starts to glow with almost anything trapped in its beam will start to move.

Terror Sphere: A black colored orb which can be produced out of nowhere. The sphere can be used to defend the user, when an attack hits the sphere the attack will disappear. Then another use it can be thrown at an enemy target.

Vehicle: Name "Over-Bite" A spider looking bike that has red legs with black for the rest of the body. At the mouth of the venomous month a small stun laser is placed.

RP Sample: Too lazy to find one, anyway I was accepted into all your other RPs.

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Name: Imber (Rain)

Landscape Description: The land scape is a jungle region covered in heavy bushes and trees. The grass is thick and heavy preventing most hazards that are well hidden within it. The trees are over hundreds feet tall with many vines hanging all over them. Many streams run through the jungle with one major river running down the middle.

Possible Hazards:

Heavy rain fall they pours down really fast weakening anything which it hits.

Trees or vines fall over randomly without warning.

Found Monsters:

[spoiler=Monsters]

Name: Odonata

Description: The size of the dragonfly beast is about the size of an adult male. With two rows of wings which can flap at high speeds. A long tail with about 3 feets long at the end with a spike blade. The average Odonata is greenish, yellowish color. Usually travel in a group of 6 with a leader Odonata with a darker green then the average Odonata. The attack groups get up close range to do major damage to their prey.

Where Eye of XANA Is: The eye is located on top of the head of Odonata.

Weaponry:

Venomous fangs when bit by it the victim loses feeling in the effect area.

A bladed tail which can be swung to block weak laser attacks.

Possible Locations: Forest, Imber.

 

 

 

 

Name added. I don't care if it is lame, can't think of anything.

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Name: Brandon Mitchell

Year: Sophomore

Gender:Male

Ethnicity: Haitian

Appearance: about 5'7. Short black hair, almost making him look bald. He has dark brown/black eyes and wears glasses. He is always seen wearing a brown or black hoodie with a skull on the back, blue denim jeans, and either white basketball sneakers or blue in-line skates

Personality: Smart but at times, really lazy. He can be easilly bored though he could never pay attention to one thing at a time. He usually would act what people would call 'crazy or 'weird', but to him is really normal

Relationships: He would stay quiet, but he would usually tries to be their friend.

Skill with Using Supercomputer: medium

 

Lyoko

Lyoko Appearance:He wears a black jumpsuit with blue neon lighint around the back and the arms and red lighting on the back in the shape of a skull. his hair is grown and spiked and has markings on his face: a red marking coming down from his left eye and a blue marking coming from the top of his nose.

Focus: Speed and stamina

Weapon: broadsword

Abilities:

1. Boomerang Blade: Basically what it means.

2. Severing Slash: a slash that can reach far lenghts, until its limit of 150 meters

3. Sword Wheel: spins his sword either on the ground or in the air to block attacks or attack enemies

Vehicle: None

 

Additional

RP Sample: Brandon got to the other side of the Time Portal and looked around. They were in the right time and place, but something was off. There was a giant storm. He looked at the side of the building and noticed streets completly filled with TimeSplitters of every kind possible. "No. This can't be happening." He looked at his Temporal Uplink and checked the human population back in their original time. Only a small 137 humans were left on Earth. "This Can't be happening. He did it. He made the ultimate army."

Rules Password: Scanner

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Name: Akihiko Inumaru

Year: Freshman

Gender: M

Ethnicity: Hispanic, and Japanese

Appearance: Short for his age, 5"2'. Has blue eyes.He has Dirty Blonde hair and wears a Light Blue Shirt with Black Jeans his cuffs at the ankle are red. Wears white shoes. usually found chewing on a toothpic (Thinks that is cool)

Personality: Doesn't talk much but takes interest in school work and Class. Doesnt seem like the one to have too many friends but is well known around his neighborhood as "The Kid with Plans" for his intellegence. Once you get to know him he begins to become trustworthy. He doesnt like people that give him attitudes. Many people assume that he gives them attitudes because Of his much sarcastic views(This sentence belongs in Relationships as well)

Relationships: He works well with other people once he gets to know them(In this case everyone) He doesnt like people that give him attitudes. Many people assume that he gives them attitudes

Skill with Using Supercomputer: Medium

 

Lyoko

Lyoko Appearance: Wears a black overcoat, White gloves, white sneakers. There isn't much to explain his face and hair are same as in Real life except his eyes are red.

Focus: Speed

Weapon: His Gloves that creat Flames when Friction is made.

Abilities: Flame Blast. Speed Step(Dodge moves by moving quickly)

He has found a way to use a meterial in the Lyoko Realm to his advantage the gloves he wears are made of these computerized Meterials. He uses these to make fire when he makes friction using his gloves.

Vehicle: The OverRider: The form of this is like a skateboard but the middle starts to go in making it look like an hourglass shape. It has golden wheels and red circular patterns on the board.

 

 

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RP Sample:(From an old DN RP)

After walking with Mina to the Hotel Mina signs in and Akihiko then takes a walk by himself when he takes out a blank black notebook when a guy in a rush bumps into Akihiko causing him to drop his book.

"Oh I'm sorry I was trying to get to work" The guy says as he picks up Akihiko book

"No!..." he yelled but it was too late the man had already picked it up!

"Huh? whats the prob..AH! what is that?" the man yells seeing a creature behind AKIHIKO

"... You can see him huh?"

"What is that!?"

"First you must tell me your name and where you work"

"I work at the American NPA my name is kraw Machintosh" Akihiko then writes down the mans name in the notebook and waits but nothing happens

"f***! an alias" He thinks to himself "Go to work, but you must never tell anyone that we have met and you cant tell anyone what you have seen today GOT ME!?"

"Yes" says the man as he runs to his job...

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Name: Ilse Abendroth (I suck at names, change to whatever you like.)

Year: Freshman

Gender: Female

Ethnicity: German

Appearance: Ilse dons a long, bright orange jacket that is much larger then her normal size. It drags down almost to her knees, which really isn't saying much, considering she's only 4 feet tall at the maximum. She also wears dark pants and a necklace in the shape of a cross. Her hair is short and dark.

Personality:She's very religious, and would stand by her beliefs even if it meant her her life. She attends church on Sunday mornings, and recites daily prayer before sleep. She's also generally very loyal. Some might describe her as being a 'goody two shoes'. She generally likeds to try her best and help show people the correct path to God.

Relationships: She's generally timid and meek, but not afraid to talk to people. Although, the fact that she is constantly mocked for being religious doesn't help. She has very few friends because of her beliefs.

Skill with Using Supercomputer: Low. She dislikes technology.

 

Lyoko

Lyoko Appearance: In Lyoko, she's garbed in a white robe with various silver and gold necklaces in the shape of crosses. A large, diamond encrusted cross easily stands out from the others. A White, fingerless gloves are on each of her hands, with a black cross on the back of her palm. Her eyes are protected by a small screen, just big enough to cover her eyes.

Focus: Power.

Weapon: A very broad sword. The left half is black, while the right is white. There is a single blood-red cross growing down the middle of the blade. Contrary to it's width, the sword is quite small in length.

Abilities: Purifying Light; Arrows of light shoot out of her back, any foes hit are paralyzed for a short amount of time.

 

Formidable Faith; An aura of light surrounds her, and she steadily regains her strength. The aura cannot be broken while in use, and any enemies hitting it take damage. Lasts for a very short amount of time.

Vehicle: N/A

 

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"Ugh" Rumane muttered in disgust as she vomited over a plethora of trash. She could barely keep herself still, and she stumbled over her own feet as she tried to regain balance from her ordeal. A voice could be heard from a ways off, and she could see a silhouette of a man leaving the alley. Due to still being dazed, she couldn't pinpoint where the voice was coming from. It was getting louder. Her head was pounding. She quickly grasped her ears, screaming in pain as she clumsily ran after the silhouette.

 

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Name: Natalie Bellamole

Year: Sophmore

Gender:Female

Ethnicity:Japanease and Italian

Appearance: 5'1.Long flowing black hair.Wears a purple t-short with a guitar and heart.Ripped jeans.Wears purple contacts but has light blue eyes.Her skin is a light brown color.She wears a Blue jacket with a B on it in pink.She always has her hair tied up into a ponytail.

Personality:She is a very funny girl but is a bit to funny.She will be the best loving person at times.She will somtimes use you if your annoying.But if you stay on her good note she will not be mean to you.She is preppy at most times.She is also very hiper and jumpy when she drinks coffee.But when you mess her hair she gets mad.

Relationships:She will act very cool and calm around kids.But if she likes you she will giggle alot at what you say.Also when you really try to be mean to her she will ignore you.But if you do annoy her alot she will get really mad at you but it goes away in like 4 minutes.But she will try to make friends with everyone mean to her or not mean to her.

Skill with Using Supercomputer: {low, medium, high}low

 

Lyoko

Lyoko Appearance: She looks like the evil girl.She has a black shirt and black panst with her bow and arrows on her back.Her hair get tied up into a ponytail.She has purple and black marks on her face.Her clothes have lines of green and blue on them.She has a shirt that has wings on it that makes her fly.Her wings are sorta like eagle wings but they are black and blue and they are longer.Her bow loks like a regular bow and her arrows are like 2 arrows stacked ontop of eatch other.Her bow is Blue with streaks of purple.Her arrows are red with a little bit of purple.Her bow is made of oak wood.Her arrows are made of a light like metal.Her arrows beep three times quickly then they blow up.

Focus: {speed, strength, stamina, power, technical}speed

Weapon: {only 1}bow and arrow

Abilities: {3 max}Can control fire (Very limited) Exsplosive Arrows(When her arrows touch a sloid object they blow up)

Vehicle: her wings

 

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RP Sample: (Natalie slowly walked towards the dark ally way she was shaking with fear)."I have no clue why i am doing this but i got to" Natalie said.(She then looked into the ally)."Maybe i shouldn't do this maybe i should go".(Natalie shook her head and walked into the ally to a hidden door)"I'm here" She said.(The door opened slowly)

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@swatking:

1) We're using advanced rules, which prohibits the usage of "expies", or copied characters. Therefore, change her name.

2) Your spelling and grammar is atrocious. Fix that.

2) A sophomore-age girl wouldn't be 6'7". Change that.

3) The "good/evil" part is incredibly drastic, a bit too so to be realistic. Make it less pervasive as a part of her character.

4) The "relationships" section needs more detail.

5) Lyoko appearance needs much more detail and description. Color, patterns, etc.

6) Don't describe her outfit in terms of another stereotype, such as "assassin." There are many types of assassins, and i don't know what kind you're talking about.

7) The wings would count as a vehicle, because Aelita used them as so. One or the other. If you do use them, describe them more.

8) Just a bow and arrow? No other description? Add detail on its size, color, appearance, etc.

9) So her weapon doesn't have any abilities? (E.G, give them some. Can she make the arrows explode, do they "pierce" armor, etc.)

10) The vehicle needs more description, unless you're using the wings.

11) You're forgetting the RP Sample and the Rules Password.

 

Unless you fix these within the next day, I will have to deny all further applications from you. Sorry.

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@Saku and galesonic: Accepted.

 

@Namo:

1) Hispanic with a Japanese name? Yeah, no. Change one or the other

2) His outfit seems suspiciously similar to Odd's. Make it a bit different.

3) You say his weapon is fire, but he seems to use the gloves in actuality. Fix that.

4) Your spelling and grammar could use some improvement.

5) More detail in Personality and Relationships.

6) Not all of us know what a RipStick looks like. Describe it more, without using references to real-life objects.

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