Guest Morpheous Erebos Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Name: {we're using Latin, so make sure to post an accurate name and a translation} - Morire Assiderato (To freeze to death)Landscape Description: {at least 1 decent paragraph} There is nothing but ice. There are stalagmites of ice everywhere you look. There are about 5 towers in this area. There is no virtual sea, although with all the ice, you can always slip. If you fall hard enough, you lose Life Points. Possible Hazards: {just make a list of 2-3} Falling ice, slippingFound Monsters: {just examples, real or made-up} Blocks, Tarantulas, Kankrelats Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 That sectors seems really boring. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Morpheous Erebos Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 @Saku and galesonic: Accepted. @Namo:1) Hispanic with a Japanese name? Yeah' date=' no. Change one or the other2) His outfit seems suspiciously similar to Odd's. Make it a bit different.3) You say his weapon is fire, but he seems to use the gloves in actuality. Fix that.[b']4) Your spelling and grammar could use some improvement.[/b]5) More detail in Personality and Relationships.6) Not all of us know what a RipStick looks like. Describe it more, without using references to real-life objects. Can you let the bold slide? We can help him along the way... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 @Saku and galesonic: Accepted. @Namo:1) Hispanic with a Japanese name? Yeah' date=' no. Change one or the other2) His outfit seems suspiciously similar to Odd's. Make it a bit different.3) You say his weapon is fire, but he seems to use the gloves in actuality. Fix that.[b']4) Your spelling and grammar could use some improvement.[/b]5) More detail in Personality and Relationships.6) Not all of us know what a RipStick looks like. Describe it more, without using references to real-life objects. Can you let the bold slide? We can help him along the way... Eh, sure. To stay on topic, the name of your sector isn't entirely accurate. May I suggest "Frigus?" It means "winter cold". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Morpheous Erebos Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Sure, that works... I knew a two-word sector name wouldn't work... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Ok fixed... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 From now on, I will handle all application changes through PM. This will prevent the thread from being clogged. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Real Life Name: Jack Yu Year: Junior Gender: Male Ethnicity: Chinese Appearance: A tall 5"9 boy with straight black hair and brown eyes. He wears a green polo shirt, blue jeans and trainers. He also has a blue digital watch that acts like a telephone 9which he could talk to his relatives). He is rather strong, but not much muscles can be seen. Personality: Being a new student, Jack is a rather shy boy at first sight. At the beginning, he cannot cope well with others. Over a short period of time, he can get use to it and make good friendships. His leadership skills are surprisingly good and is courageous in different scenarios. Relationships: Although he is rather shy, he could become quite popular within a few months. He currently has no girlfriends in this school, but he does have a girlfriend in his other school, Monica, which he keeps in touch with privately. Skill with Using Supercomputer: Because his dad is an IT manager, he has some basic knowledge on working with computers and, of course, hi-tech supercomputers. he can easily scan his friends to Lyoko and devirtualize then as well. Although he can do those basic skills, he can't do much else. Lyoko Lyoko Appearance: A strong warrior having the power of kung-fu. He has a green and black ninja outfit, but no mask. The ninja outfit is quite tight. The concept is that his chest, knee and arms are in green, and the rest is black. He wears a green power band which can come in good use (to direct wind and so on). He wears black gloves, but they are covered by his weapon. Focus: His focus is on speed and power. His agility is very high, and so is his accuracy at aiming at the XANA eye. Weapon: His weapon is a pair of moonblades, a weapon which Jack could hold on in the middle like a spear. the handle is at the middle of the weapon and has two curving blades at each end of it. He has one in each hand (one to defend, one to attack. Both can be used to attack if necessary.) The weapon is quite light, which gives a boost to Jack while fighting. When attacking the enemy, he usually slashes his target, making a mark of a 'X'. Abilities: Fireblades: His blades has the power to be heated, increasing his damage by a lot. He has two extra ways of using it. Firstly, he can use it as a range attack, by slashing the air. When he does that, the heat is released in a orange crescent shape and can attack the monster from quite a distance. This is one of the only ways he can attack a flying monster. His second way is to build up more energy and charge at the enemy (think of Chidori, but with fire). He slashes them at an enemy, immediately devirtualizing them. This, however, can only be used once in one Lyoko trip. Blink (name comes from Warcraft): One of the reasons he is a strong warrior. When close to an enemy, he can warp behind them (the range is a maximum of 3 meters) almost immediately. When doing so, he could attack from behind. he can only do it once. Another use of it is to get away from dangerous situations. Vehicle: *Currently can't think of one. If possible, can he have no vehicles?* RP Sample: Jack fiddled with his watch, which suddenly seemed to malfunction. He ignored it, and went back to his room. He then saw something pass by. A shadow, a dark figure which seems to have been....XANA! He saw it by the door, and it glided out to the corridor. "Oh damn, XANA is out again! I better warn the others." He ran to the corridor, and out of the door. He tripped, on what seems to be a loose wire. Jack stumbled down the stairs, but immediately grabbed the stair handle and brought himself up. He then ran down the stairs straight into the canteen. Password is Scanner. (Have no idea what's this for.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Morpheous Erebos Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 The password is to make sure you read the rules... Since he's more experienced at this, Rinne has complete control over acceptance, so wait for him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cypress Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 there u go Real LifeName: Kyle HansonYear: juniorGender: MaleEthnicity: American(or is that n/a, i dont know, you know what i mean)Appearance: Bout 5'-8''. Short-almost midlong blonde/brown mix hair, where in front covers most of his eye area. Normally seen with his hoodie and black ripped jeans. Blue eyes. Pale to mid-Pale skin tone.Personality: Never really takes things too seriously, unless the wellbeings of others are at risk. Has a real soft spot for little children. Never really wants to be in charge, because of responsibilities, but wants to be a major part of it. Relationships: Gets along with everyone that isnt one of those 'my way or the highway' people, and other generic pestsSkill with Using Supercomputer: medium LyokoLyoko Appearance: hair surrounded by a pair of black goggles. Orange-Black suit. Silver-black belt coming across the waistline, and another over the shoulder. A small platform like object mounted on the back of the suit, acting as a battery pack to his weapon.(about half shoulder to shoulder length)Focus: ill edit later, but what do u mean by technical, and arent strength and power the same thing?Weapon: sort of an energy cannon mounted on his left arm, with two cords connecting that and the object mounted on his back. Just aim and fire. additional aim is givin with the use of his goggles.Abilities: useage of Goggles: with usage, gives additional aim to attacks, and a 360* view of his surroundings.Vehicle: none Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 For now on, I'd like to see some more European characters, because the RP does take place in France. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mrs. SHINee <3 Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 i edited most of it so can you check and tell me what i need to fix now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin_Souls Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 [/u]Real Life[/u]Name: JakeYear: sophomoreGender:maleEthnicity:Native AmiricanAppearance: He has red brown skin his body type is Mesomorph. He usally waers a Yankess Cap on his head. He wear Blue jeans and a brown belt. His shirt is green saying with brown writing "Be Green". He hair is naturaly black but he dyded it green. Personality: Jake is very smart and clever with that he can figer any thing if he puts his mind to it. Jake usally think about thing that most kid his age cant even comprehind like time travel. He usally thinks about Jokes during his free time. Relationships: He is alwas to nice he just meets. He alwas trys to make his friends lafph.Skill with Using Supercomputer: {low, medium, high} High LyokoLyoko Appearance: Jake wears a camo shirt. On his face is Camo piant and he is bald. His shorts are a brownness green. He has a brown sash to but his bow on his back.Focus: staminaWeapon: a bowAbilities: Flame arrow- An arrow that appers in front of Jake Flaming. When it hits some one the thing that is hit loses 40 life points.Ice Arrow- An arrow that appers in front of Jake thats tip is 40 below. When it hits some one the thing that is hit loses 10 life points and is frozen.Thunder arrow: Jake's strongest arrow when Jake touches one he loses 5 life points. When it hits some one the thing that is hit loses 50 life points. Vehicle: OverArrow- A Skate red bord that is shaped like an arrow. AdditionalRP Sample: Jake: i beeter make sure she is ok Jake starts to check her pules check out some of the damage he gave to her then Clarie thinks he is pure gold (then she bolts right up)Jake's face turn whiteClarie: dont please a got few wounds (she then pulls up her shirt Jake's face turns red about half way he sees this huge cut)Jake: how did u get thisClarie: i was fight with a girl from Athena a got a few wounds from her and they havent gone away and worrice its hurting more than ever (Jake starts to examin the wound)Jake: she put a poision on her weapon not strong enoph to kill u but to make it hurt a lot Rules Password:scanner Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted June 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 I am no longer accepting applications. Once all currently posted applications are reviewed and then accepted or denied, the RP will start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Morpheous Erebos Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 That, I have a bit of a problem with... Just allow them through PM... Don't cut them off... I know it's work, but what about potential members that want to join? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mrs. SHINee <3 Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 i edited mine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mrs. SHINee <3 Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 why do i have to do the rp sample and the other people did not have to that is kinda unfair Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted June 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 why do i have to do the rp sample and the other people did not have to that is kinda unfair The other people had turned in their applications in the club thread before I decided to add the RP sample requirement. They are still being held to the same standards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mrs. SHINee <3 Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 oh ok then well thanks for the explination and can you chack my app cause i am positive i edited it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zimiri of the Muse Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 rinne should i post meh app here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted June 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 rinne should i post meh app here Please PM it to me, to stop any more unnecessary posting. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 I edited it. Hope you accept! (And sorry if this is spam >_>) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted June 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 Pikachu, accepted. swatking55, Twin_Souls, Namo, and Cypress, I will start the game tomorrow, regardless of your profile status. If you would like to continue, please revise your applications using the info I PM'ed you, otherwise I will have to deny you in order to start this thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Morpheous Erebos Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 Namo said he's out of the RP, so no worries with him... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 Before we start.... Are the old monsters and sectors going to be in this RP? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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