Sakura90210 Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 These are the very first cards that i have made. Please go easy on me and please give me advice on anything you think i might need to work on. Thanks! I hope you like them! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KHFangirl Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 hey, these are really nice. i dont watch naruto anymore so i don't have a clue who most of these people are though....:? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shonen Jump™ Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 the fact you can't spell Akatsuki alone is dissapointing effects are meh ocg errors bad pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GenGhlahr Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Hmmm... I guess they are pretty good, except that they have capitalization errors in them (like "defense"). To Sasori, it is impossible to attack in defense position. Plus, it's pretty pointless to say that you can summon him in defense position. You can do that with every monster.There are many more corrections, but I'll just rate now You did fine 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
everlasting Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 alright, errors right off the bat 1. akasuti = akatsuki 2. lots of spelling errors, OCG 3. where the heck are Tobi and Pein, they're like the most important. anyways, I hope you can do better after this advice 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mizuku Kagirinai Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 ....Can I gouge my eyes out with spoons yet? Awful cards. Although, they aren't as bad as some. 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 not bad for 1st cards.. OCG errors.. but the pics aren't bad.. so 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gkstjsrb99 Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 The attacks are too low Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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