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Um... WTF?? You see the quiz in 1 thread, and you post the answers in a CARD CONTEST thread? What is really stupid is that Yondaime specifically told people NOT to post in the thread and to PM him the answers...

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Here are the results:

[spoiler=Results]

Monkey (Kisame):

Picture: Well I think the holo is a little heavy, but the picture itself is fine 3/5

OCG/Grammar: 7/10 only minor errors

When this card is Summoned' date=' you can add 1 "Umi" from your Deck to your hand. When "Umi" is on the field, this card cannot be [b']targeted[/b] by the effect of Spell or Trap cards. Once per turn, By paying 1000 Life Points, you can Special Summon 1 "Chakra Shark Token" (Fish-Type/WATER/Level 4/ATK 1700/DEF 1400) toyour field. This token is treated as a Normal monster. You can only Special Summon 1 "Chakra Shark Token" each turn. By destroying 1 "Chakra Shark Token" on your field, you can increase your Life Points by 500.

Bold: Needs to be fix’d

Italic: Needs to be removed

 

Effect/balancing: 6/10

Well it is OP, as you can get a UMI from your deck when it is summoned, so when you play it, it won’t be effect by the effect of spell and trap cards. Also the last line seems sorta random, with the token can be used for tributes so that seems fine. Also isn’t tokens treated as normal monsters anyway?

 

Final: 16/25

 

Kira (Pein):

 

Picture: I have seen too many times =.= 1/5

 

OCG/Grammar: 8/10

If this card is the only “Akatsuki” monster on the field during the End Phase' date=' destroy it. This card gains 300 ATK for each “Atatsuki” [b']monster[/b] card on the field. If this card is removed from the field by its own effect, Special Summon it to your opponent’s field during your next Standby Phase.

 

Bold: Needs to be fix’d

Italic: Needs to removed

 

Effect/balancing: 4/10

It is UP, really the first line is pointless. Then ATK gain? Really that is boring nothing special and then your opponent can get a free monster? Nothing more to say.

 

Final: 13/25

 

In.Spyre (Konan):

 

Pic: The picture is great is feels a live 4/5

 

OCG/Grammar: 6/10

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 2 monster you control with "Akatsuki" in their name. When this card is Special Summoned' date=' you can discard 1 card from your hand. If you do, this card can attack your opponent directly. If you activate this effect, this card cannot attack during your next turn. Decrease the ATK and DEF of this card by 500 if your opponent destroys a monster you control with "Akatsuki" [b']in its name. [/b] []by battle.[/i] When this card is sent to the Graveyard by battle, increase your Life Points by 400 and inflict 400 damage to your opponent.

 

Bold: Needs to be fix’d

Italic: Needs to be removed or added

 

Effect: 7/10

Well for the first part I like how you can attack directly with your next battle phase skipped. Also the ATK and DEF thing seems sorta random with the last effect, but LP gain can be good somewhat. One of the better effects, but we have to see.

 

Final: 17/25

 

DemonX (Kakuza):

 

Picture: Seems overused also so nothing special 2/5

 

OCG/Grammar: God learn English grammar please, also OCG needs work 2/10

Every time this monster goes in the graveyard' date=' [b']it is automaticlly go[/b] in the owners hand on his/her Draw Phase and you can't draw on the turn it return in your hand but on the 5th time this card is [/b]destroy[/b] and remove from play.

 

Bold: Needs to be fix’d

Italic: Needs to be removed

 

Effect: 1/10

Wow this effect is massively UP, not much needs to be said here. Also the last part of the effect seems really random =.=

 

Final: 5/25

 

Hayate Masaura (Pein):

 

Picture: I like the picture, but maybe if you cropped it. It would have been better 3/5

 

OCG/Grammar: Well not much to say, some good OCG here. 7/10

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

Once per turn' date=' during your Standby Phase, you can flip a coin and call it. If you called it right, place 1 Six Paths Counter on this card (max. 6). If you called it wrong remove 1 Six Paths Counter from this card. [b']If this card would be destroyed by battle, you can remove 6 Six Paths Counters from this card to Special Summon all monsters destroyed that turn to their respective owners' field.[/b] If you cannot, Special Summon this card to your opponent's field during his/her next Battle Phase.

 

Bold: Needs to be fix’d big time, needs to be reworded

 

Effect: 5/10

Really the effect is really slow and UP. It takes forever to get the tokens and it probably won’t last long for the tokens. Also the last line makes in UP giving your opponent a free monster sorta bad.

 

Final: 15/25

 

Shinobi (Itachi):

 

Picture: Finally someone to do Itachi, I don’t like the pic much so how about 3/5

 

OCG/Grammar: Surprisingly I couldn’t find any OCG errors, but only a few grammar errors 9/10

This card can only be Summoned by Tributing 2 FIRE monsters you control. The original ATK of this card is equal to the combined ATK of the monsters you Tributed to Summon this monster. When this card is Summoned' date=' place 5 Chakra Counters on this card. You must remove 1 Chakra Counter from this card for each time this card attacks. During each of your End Phases, place 1 Chakra Counter on this card. This card can attack all monsters your opponent controls once each. During your each of your Main Phases, you can remove 3 Chakra Counters from this card to place 1 Tsukuyomi Counter on a monster your opponent controls. A monster with a Tsukuyomi Counter placed on it cannot attack or change its Battle Position. When your opponent controls a monster with a Tsukuyomi Counter placed on it, this card cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, remove it from play instead.

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Effect: 8/10

Well the first two lines are good, so nothing wrong there. I have seen effects like the attack all monsters and with the counters be removed. Then the monster is destroyed, so it is okay. Toward the last few lines I like how you get a monster that can’t attack, so preventing your opponent to use huge beat sticks. Well the last line seems unneeded, but whatever. One of the better effects here.

 

Final: 20/25

 

Redrecker (Zetsu):

 

Picture: Well Zetsu is awesome so no problem there, but the picture seems squeezed and the holo could have been better so 3/5

 

OCG/Grammar: I am unable to see all mistakes so for what I have seen. I would say needs some work 6/10

 

Effect/balancing: 5/10

I can’t tell if it is UP or OP because I didn’t see the summoning card. Also reminds me of stardust dragon so sorta unoriginal.

 

Final: 14/25

 

Results:

1st. Shinobi 20/25

2nd. In.spyre 17/25

3rd. Monkey 16/25

 

 

 

Any questions please PM me and I will answer them.

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