Glow_handed Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 Hey,Those Are some zombies i made. When This Card Is Sent To The Graveyard , Discard One Card From Your Hand And Re-Summon It In Attack Position. When This Card is Activated , All Monsters With "Zombie" In Its Name Can't Be Destroyed As Result Of Battle (Damage Applied Normally). When This Card Is Special Summmoned ,Randomely Choose One Card From Your Opponents Hand And Remove It From Play. This Card Can Attack Your Opponents Lifepoints Directly. ENjoy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 firstly resurrection is spelt like this 1 S and 2 R's. Common mistake to make, bloody English language!! lol. Dont Capital every word matey your cards should read more like this: When this card is sent to the Graveyard by battle, you can discard 1 card from your hand to Special Summon this card in Face-up Attack Position. If this is a conituous effect should the card be a continuous card?? Should read more like:All "Zombie" cards cannot be destroyed by battle while this card is face-up on the field. (Damage calculation is applied normally). In your card names of, the and are not done in capitals, dont worry I did it too, Just get a bit Caps Lock happy lol. Hope that helps for now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glow_handed Posted June 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 thanx, and i relised that caps lock was on lol.And i dont know english very well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
everlasting Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 some spelling / capitialization errors (don't capitialize every word) but other than those few things, good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masked Killer Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 Cool Zombies, Glow_Handed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glow_handed Posted June 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 thanx guyz, u made me happy lol.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 Zombie of the Wolf should be dropped to LV4 or it's UPed The rest is great though 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 Great cards just don't capitalize everything! 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Läufer Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 Dang! I love Zombies! I hope that these cards are real! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glow_handed Posted June 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 Thx for yhe tip ragnarok1945, ill edit it right now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 Pic for first card is terrible 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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