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These aren't great, but then again you are new. Let me give you a few pointers:

 

The Fierce Dark Dragon

 

i) Elemental Dragons are so overdone it isn't true!

ii) Is the 'The' really neccesary?

iii) Level 8 monsters require 2 Tributes to summon, not 1

iv) Very overused effect, be more creative.

v) The pic is quite overused.

vi) 'Dark type' = 'DARK'

 

The Fierce Fire Dragon

 

This is exactly the same card as above with 'fire' replacing 'dark'... Be more creative.

 

The Fierce Water Dragon

 

Again, this is exactly the same card...also, "Ice type" doesn't exist.

 

The Mighty Fierce Dragon

 

i) Don't make DIVINE monsters! They're not realistic!

ii) Dark, Fire, Water are Attributes, not Types!

iii) Work on your OCG...a lot

iv) Overpowered effect

 

 

Work a lot on these cards

 

4/10

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