valeros420 Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 Any feedback would be helpful, and errors I have made, etc.. Thank you and I hope to be making more and better cards in the future. I will keep adding cards to this thread. Again, thank you for your feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Mousy Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 Not bad. Capitalize a few things. I think it is When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard , you can Special Summon up to 2 "Timid, Magi, Genis" from your hand, Deck or Graveyard. This monster can attack your opponent's Life Points directly on the turn it was Special Summoned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 Pretty nice, but you have to destroy your genis on your turn to get the nicest results, becouse, if your opponent destroys that card in he's turn, you can't directly attack opponent on your turn. Did you think about it? ;)Anyway - 7.8/10 would be good for start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 torrential tribute, attak a stronger monster w/ it (like i so often do with pyramid turtle), plenty of ways to get it destroyed. great card for your first time. and pretty good in general too. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
valeros420 Posted June 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 Thanks guys, I made the changes that were suggested. I appreciate the feedback, more cards are on the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mazerrick Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 I think its to overpowered, when it gets destroyed it can revive itself Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 OCG is bad but I had bad OCG when I was new. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mazerrick Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 OCG is bad but I had bad OCG when I was new. What errors? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 Not bad. Capitalize a few things. I think it is When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard ' date=' you [b'] can Special Summon [/b] up to 2 "Timid, Magi, Genis" from your hand, Deck or Graveyard. This monster can attack your opponent's Life Points directly on the turn it was Special Summoned. This errors.Don't be mad but he have an errors my rate is 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
valeros420 Posted June 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 I think its to overpowered' date=' when it gets destroyed it can revive itself[/quote'] I noticed what you mean after I read it a few times. I orginally had his ATK at 1400, but then lowered it. I think I'm going to change it to: When this card is destroyed as a result of Battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon up to 2 "Timid Magi, Genis" from your hand, Deck or Graveyard. This monster can attack your opponent's Life Points directly on the turn it was Special Summoned. What od you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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