Kitty Posted July 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 Bump!!!!! 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted July 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 T.T no ones gonna rate my cards... they're improved really... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
al9090 Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 Nice i realy like them they are inproved i though it was another misleadying title Xd JK there realy nice (P.s. im a fast typer and reader XD)................... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted July 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 O.o lolz XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthSuhail Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 Ermm...i might sound dumb now but . is Guardian of the castle supposed to be a cat going along with ur theme of "Cat League"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted July 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 Ermm...i might sound dumb now but . is Guardian of the castle supposed to be a cat going along with ur theme of "Cat League"? no it's not a cat neither are the West, East, North, or South Wing Guards...(which i have yet to post) i see the thing as sort of like the guardian protects the kings.... u see... and the guards are the same as a king... plus i woulda used a dragon but they're over rated.. so i used a dino zombie instead... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 the pics are goodbut there z some OCG errorsbut still 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
summers307 Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 My what big cats you have my dear! Spectacular cards, and wonderful use of kitties. I was actually hoping you had a few MORE vanillas, but you use the ones you have wonderfully. 9.5/10, because something is always wrong (I don't know what, but it always is!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 lolz thanks and i'll be adding more.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Kingnova unlimited Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Keep up the good work 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Some good cards, some bad. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 which ones are bad? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
summers307 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Here are some OCG's (I think) that might be corrected. Bear in mind I'm not perfect with it, so I could be wrong. Leo, the Lion King: Just get rid of the "once per turn part". Except in extreme circumstances, he's only going to be special summoned once per turn, so it seems excessive. A few of these cards you seperate abilities with a period and then start the next sentence with "And". Command Guard and Dark Cheetah Warrior are two of them. If I may, heres a suggestion for Command Guard;"While you control "Cat League-Guardian of the Castle", increase the ATK of this card by 600 and once per turn you can reduce the ATK of this card by half to attack your opponents Life Points directly." Might also consider lowering this cards level and ATK and raising the ATK of Guardian of the castle. Horbid, exiled warrior: If he's so horrible, why's he a LIGHT monster? In regards to his text, normal's text don't address the players. So it would sound better as "as evil as they come, this beast has been known to rip any who cross his path to shreds. Those who meet his gaze see hate filled eyes, and then nothing else". Kira-the Ice Tigress: "This card can not be sent to the Graveyard by the effect of a Spell or Trap card. If this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle you can return it to your hand during your End Phase". Lioness Angel- "During the turn that this card is Summoned, Spell and Trap cards can not be activated. While this card is face-up on the field your opponent can not select a card with "Cub" in its name as an attack target. Soga- Don't think you need the Life Point cost to allow a 600 to attack directly. South wing guard-Does it really need to be a tribute monster? Tiger Cub- SOO CUTE!!! just remove "the word" and it's perfect. There you go! Hope I don't come off as preachy, just want to help out. I hope that this HAS helped in some way shape or form. But like I tell everyone, these are simply my ideas and nothing more, use them or not as much as you like. TTFN!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 thanks.. very much ^^I'll get them fixed... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☆ Master Sami ☆ Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Cool cards. Solid OCG. Balanced effects. Good Job! 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asterr259 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 lol there is already a Tiger Dragon card XD 8/10 do u have some sort of cat fetish? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
masterkil199 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Lol Kira the ice tigress pic is from movie just like tiger cub although I don't seem to know which movie anymore. Some Good effects 4/10 max 5/10good pics 2/10 max 3/10idea 2/10 max 2/10 8/10 max 10/10 XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 yes i have a thing for cats.. lolz.. thank 4 the rattings Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
summers307 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 what gave that away? lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 hm idk.. XD lolzNO my secret is out!!! >> << >.<X3but seriously and on the "South Wing Guard" whut i was going for is like 4 guards protecting the castle and there's trouble they merge into one.... to defend the castle... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
summers307 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 How about making the other two guards different types then? Like a machine one and a another winged beast or something? maybe these will help? http://www.animecrazy.net/forums/members/deathview-albums-cool-anime-pics-picture27196-z-conquest.jpg http://www.animecrazy.net/forums/members/deathview-albums-cool-anime-pics-picture27196-z-conquest.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 there Attributes are different... that's how i did it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zombiepromking Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Not bad, i think i've seen maybe a couple of these pics before dunno whether they were from you or not but, oh well it's not like you used any overused pics (Why must every n00b use that giant blue and orange god dragon thing, i've never even seen that pic before, except for on here where EVERYONE uses it.) Back to the point cards are good OCG is pretty good and one question though:Why are the Guards Zombehs? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 ok back to my guards.. heres the original story line i had goin with these cards.. Ruler after the 4 cat kings.... the Zombie guards were brought back from the dead to guard the castle... it works better... it just make the whole set weird...... and i like it.. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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