Dissidia Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 Here are some dragon cards I made.... EFFECT: When this card is attacked, you may remove from play 1 monster card and activate 1 of the following effects:WATER: Destroy all face up continous spell cards on your opponent's side of the field.DARK: Destroy all monsters with ATK equal to or less than the removed from play monster.LIGHT: Gain lifepoints equal to the ATK of the removed from play monster.FIRE: Your opponent loses lifepoints equal to the DEF of the removed from play monster.EARTH attribute: Special summoned any Dragon type monster.WIND: Destroy all face-up continous trap cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Prince_of_Death Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 not bad OCG errors but not bad. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dissidia Posted June 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 I always get small OCG errors lol. Im used to it! :D Woops i used FIRE twice lemme fix that-fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fleshandbone Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 pretty good 5/5 good pictures too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Prince_of_Death Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 I always get small OCG errors lol. Im used to it! :D its just a few mispelling errors and capitolization errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dissidia Posted June 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 pretty good 5/5 good pictures tooThanx I reach for the best! (Making post a biiiiiit looonnnnger) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icedconnor Posted June 20, 2009 Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 those were cool. but u needed to make like one card be super awesome. U know. one that's the leader. just a suggestion, but otherwise good work man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 20, 2009 Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 I like these a lot! You've made these dragons very imaginative! So well done! Some points: Darkness Dragoni) I'd change the name to "(Synonym of Darkness) Dragon" simply because "Dark" and "Darkness" dragons are so overdone.ii) This card is a Dragon-Type, not 'Dark-Type'iii) Some OCG errors, but not sure how to fix them Dragon Eggi) Excellent effectii) 'monster card...spell card...continuous...lifepoints...trap cards...Dragon type' = 'Monster Card...Spell Card...Continuous...Life Points...Trap Cards...Dragon-Type'iii) 'WATER attribute' etc. = 'WATER' (You don't need to write attribute Earth Dragoni) Overused nameii) Overused effect, give it an edge Fire Dragoni) There is no Ice Attribute, it is covered by WATERii) 'defense position' = 'Defense Position'iii) See above for other errorsiv) Crop the pic to remove the border Ice Dragoni) Overused nameii) 'Ice' is not a type, change to Dragon-Typeiii) Same capitalisation errors as before, see above Thunder Dragoni) OCG fix:When this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard, add 2 Trap Cards to your hand from your Graveyard. Wind Dragoni) Overused nameii) Try to get a pic with a background and without sigsiii) 'as a result of battle' = 'by battle'iv) 'attribute' = 'Attribute' Overall, very well done! 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dissidia Posted June 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 Fixed most of the errors!:D :D :D :D :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ihop Posted June 20, 2009 Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 very very good 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zeroflame Posted June 20, 2009 Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 Cool cards.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted June 20, 2009 Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 good cards 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dissidia Posted June 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 My best set so far! :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkDueler555 Posted June 20, 2009 Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 not bad i realy like that dragon egg card 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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