Yoko Kurama Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Pretty simple but still i need any feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
everlasting Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 for a nine-star monster, I think it should have a better effect, and lower the ATK to 3000 or below, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fay D. Flourite Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 OCG correction: "This card cannot attack your opponent's Life Points directly" dont shorten Life Points. This card has a good picture but it is a dull card. Sorry to say this but it is like a "vanilla". Give it some more effect, especially since it is a high level monster! Overall: Ok OCG, Good Picture, Dull, Boring Effect= 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yoko Kurama Posted June 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Yeah i know...im planning on changing his level and ATK and DEF but im making a sequal card "Phathior Released" who so far has a pretty wicked effect i just need a good picture. Thats why this card is dull. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bebe3434 Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Is this your first card?? Well if it is its pretty good for a begginer ^.^ but ya like they mentioned above the effect is a bit.......bland. nice pick though ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yoko Kurama Posted June 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Of the few cards im proud of i like this one alot but im working on a better version right now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rise of the Eldrazi Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Wh evryone else said, awsom pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yoko Kurama Posted June 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Ahaha Sudden inspiration, looking at deviantart pictures ive decided to make a new set. The thirteenth alliance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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