My first ritual

[Boneface]

[Phatt Mann]

You need to work on your OCG a lot.

 

For Example:

 

Ape Ritual: This card is used to Ritual Summon "Ape Man" from your hand. You must also Tribute monsters whose Level Stars equal 5 or more from your hand or your side of the field.

 

and

 

Ape Man: This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Ape Ritual". During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points.

 

Second of all, change the ATK to 2200 and DEF to 1450. The Type is Beast, not creature.

 

I hope all of the above can help you towards making a better card.