Undead Maiden, Probably the start of another set! **NEW CARDS** **NEED RATINGS**

[Ģค๓blє]

Zombies! Not enough people make them! There are no themed zombies either. So I present the start of the "Undead" collection.

 

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[Once per turn, if you control this monster on the field, you can equip it to a face-up monster monster on your opponent's of the field as an Equip Card, OR unequip it and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. When equipped to a monster by this card's effect, that monster is destroyed the 2nd Standby Phase after being equipped. (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, this card is destroyed instead.)]

 

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[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

OCG fix: "Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 Zombie-Type monster with 1000 or less DEF from you hand or Deck"

 

Great card but could be dangerous to go against when the owner is using a deck with high level zpmbies that have low defenses ^^

 

Great card 9/10

[M0∑0]

themed zombies= the vampire cards

 

effect is boring... pic is okay 7/10

[Ģค๓blє]

I meant themed ZOMBIE. Not zombie type!

 

How is the effect boring?

 

Updated card too.

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

Great now that theres no OCG errors 10/10 ^^

[Ģค๓blє]

I have a new one, currently adding. THANKS!!!!

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

OCG fix ^^: "You can remove 1 Zombie-Type monster in your Graveyard from play to attack twice this turn."

 

Great ^^ but this effect is a little dull maybe add a little bit more effect?

 

8/10

[Dark Lord Creator]

your spelled Assassin wrong. But i like the cards but not the 1st picture. 6/10

[Ģค๓blє]

Updated, new card too.

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

Cool ^^ lol you keep forgetting to cap the G in graveyard.

 

OCG fix: "Remove 1 Zombie-Type monster in your Graveyard from play to destroy 1 face-up monster on your opponent's side of the field. This card cannot attack on the same turn this effect was activated."

(Sorry if my OCG fix is getting annoying)

Good still ^^ keep it up 8/10

[.Leo]

they are good cards. the pic in card 1 isn't that great but anyway the cards are still great. you fixed the OCG errors as far as i can see. 8.5/10

[lacikus]

OK cards pic are great pic is ok 7/10

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

Lol Hmm. Im not sure how the OCG goes when your dealing with "rows" so im useless here cause it doesnt sound right but im not sure if it is wrong either lol. At any rate its a good effect and good OCG. nice pic too 8/10

[Ģค๓blє]

*Slams head* Thanks Lovely Lady. I am going to write that on my monitor so I remember. LOL

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

lol write what down?

[Ģค๓blє]

The graveyard thing.

 

P.S. Just looked at a card that deals with it, Alien Infiltrator, it says column, not row. CHANGING

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

Oh lol well i better look that stuff up too then

[Angel of Silence]

Some OCG but not much. Good pics. 9/10 Good job. keep making them.

[Ģค๓blє]

Thanks everyone! I'll be back later!

 

Pool party than a baseball game. Probably back between those, than back after the game.

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

For the last part of your spell it should be "whose ATK is equal to or less then the destroyed monster"

Good pic

9/10 ^^

[Ģค๓blє]

Thanks, I g2g now.

 

I remember Graveyard!

[everlasting]

make sure to put a period at the end of of your last sentence in the spell card, but from what I saw, perfect OCG, and no major areas of concern. Good job, MartialRocks!

[Ģค๓blє]

Thanks!

[ragnarok1945]

neat cards and effects. I see no OCG errors

 

9.9/10

[Ģค๓blє]

Thanks!

 

LOTS MORE TO RATE

 

P.S. For all of you who read my one message about have a baseball game... Well, we won and we're going to the playoffs!!!!!!!!!!!!! I had 2 hits, 1 walk, and 2 catches. There wasn't one at bat that a didn't get on base. No balls hit to me that i didn't catch! MY BEST GAME EVER.