dragoncreator12 Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 These are the cards I'v been working on. Note these are still in progress If this monster successfully destroys a monster in battle then half of the destroyed monster's ATK points is inficted on your opponent's life points. When this card is destroyed as result of a battle you can special summon 1 level 6 or lower Dark attribute monster from your hand or graveyard. If this monster successfully destroys a monster in battle then half of the monster's ATK points go to your life points. During your standby phase you can pay 500 life points to destroy an activated trap or spell card on the field. "Light Moon Dragon" + "Dark Moon Dragon"If this monster successfully destroys a monster in battle this card gains 400 more ATK and DEF points. During your standby phase you can discard 2 random cards from your hand and negate an effect of a monster, trap, or spell card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iron Cross Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 the first dragon is a little overpowered. i like your pictures and the effects are pretty good. 8.5/10. good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintAnti Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 The first card is balanced in my opinion, and is the only one with a good pic. get better pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncreator12 Posted June 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 Thanks for opinions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 Pics are very blurry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fluorspark Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 The grammar can be corrected... eg: "If this monster successfully destroys a monster in battle this card gains 400 more ATK and DEF points. During your standby phase you can discard 2 random cards from your hand and negate an effect of a monster, trap, or spell card." i think it should be:When this card successfully destroys a monster in battle, this card gains 400 ATK and DEF. During your standby phase, you can discard 2 cards from your hand to negate an effect of a spell, trap or monster effect. changes :1 real cards wouldnt say 'if this monster', normally 'when this card'2 it will never say 'more' and 'point' when describing atk and def3 use of commas replace 'and negate' to 'to negate'4 arrangement of the word spell, trap, monster effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 Full Moon Dragon's stats look a little low, but other than that it's fine 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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