Avatar the last airbender: Mark II (again)

[summers307]

Welcome (again) to the re-post of the monster set to my Avatar collection. I've reposted this because so many people kept telling me I needed to make the protagonists for my spells/traps, when I had already done so. Heads up, I've invented a new monster type for these cards. It's not standard, but hey, whats an Avatar set without benders?

 

There are four new types of benders like in the show. Each bender has an ability that can be activated when there is another monster on the field that shares the same attribute of the bender. They work as follows:

 

FIREBENDERS: tribute one fire type monster you control to destroy one attacking monster

WATERBENDERS: Return one water type monster to your hand to return one spell/trap card on the field to its owners hand.

AIRBENDERS: Return on air type monster to your hand to return one monster your opponent controls to his/her hand

EARTHBENDERS: Tribute one earth type monster to negate the activation of a spell card.

 

You can use the Bender itself to activate these abilities.

 

[Smackdat72]

Sweet, best avatar cards ever!!!!!! 10000000000/10!!!!

[Spartan919]

Pretty good cards; I don't know if the whole "Bender" types will work out but otherwise, sweeet! 9/10

[Dark Lightning]

7.99/10

[summers307]

Thank you for your ratings, especially you spankdat. Who knows if benders would work indeed, but thank god their fake right? lol

[DeREVOLUTION]

pretty good. The only problems are:

 

-your OCG

-Fake types

[Womi]

With the new cards, I really like them!

[Masked Killer]

7/10

Because It Needs Work!!

[summers307]

pretty good. The only problems are:

 

-your OCG

-Fake types

 

Yes, I know they are fake types, in fact, I JUST replied to someone else who said that. I know their fake types. Even more surprisingly, their fake cards as well.

 

I keep being accused of being OCG. Truthfully, I'm new, so I'm not even sure what that means. Care to enlighten the noob?

[Benoit4ever]

pretty good. The only problems are:

 

-your OCG

-Fake types

 

Yes' date=' I know they are fake types, in fact, I JUST replied to someone else who said that. I know their fake types. Even more surprisingly, their fake cards as well.

 

I keep being accused of being OCG. Truthfully, I'm new, so I'm not even sure what that means. Care to enlighten the noob?

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I shall. Hah. OCG is "Official Card Grammar". This means making the wording/descriptions on cards very eloquent, or true to the OCG--also "Official Card Game"/TCG--"Trading Card Game".

 

I'm no God at this, but for example: Avatar Aang is [errors are in BOLD]:

 

You may tribute this card to special summon "Avatar State" from your hand.

 

It should be [Fixes in BOLD]:

 

You can Tribute this card to Special Summon "Avatar State" from your hand.

 

There yeh go. Oh, and if you wanna fill yourself with knowledge, read through this forum, it's extremely helpful: The, uh, Extremely Helpful Thing xD

 

But some quick blurbs:

 

Can > May

 

graveyard > Graveyard

 

deck > Deck

 

tribute > Tribute

 

summon, special summon, flip summon, or set > Summon, Special Summon, Flip Summon, or Set

 

one, two, three, [etc.] > 1, 2, 3. [etc.]

 

attack and defense position > Attack, and Defense Position

 

draw, standby, main, or battle phase > Draw, Standby, Main, or Battle Phase

 

Hope it helped! I look forward to your future cards, hopefully with this information in mind. ^_^

 

~Frankie

[Womi]

But you will become better and better if you keep creating cards! :D

[summers307]

Thank you for the help on the my OCG (especially now that I GET it) and will get to work on fixing my cards.

 

I'm going to ask this question and with luck I'll get some reliable answers: So many people keep telling me this fake type is whats bringing it down. Lets say I get rid of the bender type and the special abilities they entail; would spell caster be what the bender should be? If not, which type best fits?

 

I think I can fix the "bender ability" concept with a bunch of equip spells, but I just want some closer on this. I made the bender type and ability because, lets face it, ITS AVATAR! A avatar set without a way for benders to be special didn't make sense to me.

 

Thnx for the advice, starting the next expansion now!

[Womi]

And the fake types arent this bad if I think about it, because were in the Pop Cultures and not in the Realistic Cards.

[summers307]

And the fake types arent this bad if I think about it' date=' because were in the Pop Cultures and not in the Realistic Cards.

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Check out my earth rumble set, I'm trying without the bender types, and make a note saying I could still have the "bending" concept, but now as equip cards instead of an unwritten rule.