star chain. I need your help!

[mrfrosty]

 

 

ok people, i need help please point out the ogg errors ( i know there are many). This is for my new set of star cards thanks!

 

[spoiler=lore] This spell card can only be activated when there are three or more Monsters on the field . Flip them to face down position, then draw three cards. Your opponent must pick one of these three cards. If it is a monster, then all monsters on your side of the field have the same attack as the monster on the farthest left of the field.If the card is a spell, then all monsters on your side of the field have the same attack as the monster in the middle of your side of the field. If the card is a trap,then all monsters on your side of the field have the same attack as the monster the farthest right of the field .At the end of the turn, all monsters attack become normal.

 

[Dark Mousy]

To activate this spell, there must be three monsters on the field

 

needs to be reworded. I think it is This spell card can only be activated when there are three or more Monsters on the field

 

Some more capitalization errors here and there, but no other rewording required.

[mrfrosty]

ok, changed the lore and card. thanks! anyone else?

[♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥]

I feel generous right now, so here's a full OCG correction. Learn from it ^^.

 

But man, was this OCG fix hard. I don't think anybody would ever make a card like this. Be happy.

 

This card can only be activated while there are 3 or more monsters on the field. When this card is activated, flip 3 monsters on the field to face-down Defense Position and draw 3 cards. Then, your opponent selects 1 of the cards you picked up. If the card is a monster, the ATK of all monsters on your side of the field are now equal to the ATK of the monster in the Monster Card Zone furthest to your left, until the End Phase. (If it's a tie, you get to choose.) If the card is a Spell, the ATK of all monsters on your side of the field are now equal to the ATK of the monster in the middle Monster Card Zone, until the End Phase. (If it's a tie, you get to choose.) If the card is a Trap, the ATK of all monsters on your side of the field are now equal to the ATK of the monster in the Monster Card Zone furthest to your right, until the End Phase. (If it's a tie, you get to choose.)

 

This card is 100% original, so I approve of it. It's also a very good card that can be used in different situations and decks. I like it.

[.Impact]

staw chan.......or however u say it that was nice

[ragnarok1945]

with the lore modified, there's no more OCG errors, and pic itself looks great, card is balanced too

 

9.5/10

[mrfrosty]

thanks everyone for the comments and you espesialy♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ , for the lore.

 

i am making a whole set of star cards, if you find any star-warriors or spellcasters please share

[Zeaux]

star chain = Star Chain

 

Anyway a good card, OCG already corrected

[mrfrosty]

ok, i made annother card i need your help with

 

 

[spoiler=lore]this can only be activated when your opponent targets a monster on your side of the field with "Star" in it's name. Send the targeted monster to the graveyard and negate the attack. Then subtract the ATK of your monster form the ATK of the attacking monster. Your opponent loses that many life points.

 

 

theres somthing wrong in the way i worded the last sentance, but i couldent think of a diffrent way to say it

[ƬЦЯBӨƧƧ]

Pretty good card, actually it's awesome, because it can be used in many different ways, OCG has been corrected by ♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ , so it's a 10/10 8).

[Guest Tiger]

The only OCG Error I noticed is:

 

three = 3

 

 

I don't like the image. =/

Effect is okay.

 

8/10