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ooc : Please use common English not myspace talk.

 

Aokushi looking at his arm.

"You expect me to go down that easly ? You are phatetic."

Aokushi gather's a little bit energy

"Hadō #90 Kurohitsugi. There is no way you can escape it."

eng : Way of Destruction , Black Coffin.

Raiden was trapped in the Black Coffin and when he appeared again he was bleeding all over.

"And I haven't master'd it yet."

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raiden's fraction appeared

Mako:sir we'll take over from here you go rest for now

Raiden:no... im starting to have some fun!you wanted a fight captin you got a fight

Raiden used double sondio and slashed twice a the same arm making the wound grow larger

Raiden: youll repent for your sins

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OoC: Also remember correct writing (every possible write error is in this sentence, i guess xd).

Exam.

'saizen ran behind zak, i kill u soon enough zak saizen shout at him' <= WRONG!(it's just to make it clear to EVERYONE)!RIGHT => 'Saizen ran behind Zak. "I kill you soon enough!', Saizen shout at him."

Correct writing helps much the reading. Also use 'OoC:'(Out of Character) when writing a text that's not part to RP

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"Hehehee...", Saizen laughed and dodged the jabbing sword strikes again and again without using his sword.

"Just how hard can it be to hit this guy?!", Zak thought when suddenly his sword got trapped to something.

"You should try harder dear Zak-kun or you'll die.", Saizen said holding his sword... with his bare hand!? and a sword was once again slashing towards the 5th Captain's chest.

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OOC: Thats GodModing when you controle another persons character, even if its only what there thinking.

What you just made my guy say never happened.

 

Zak: You shouldnt get so careless.

 

From the tower's summit, hurl the roaring beast

Way of destruction # 6, Demon fist.

*Zak punches at Saizen & his rietsu appeares around his fist & resembles a demon.*

 

[spoiler=6. Demon Fist-]

The user of this spell quickly wraps energy into their fist then releases it. As the power is released, the beastly image of a demon is formed around the fist. Upon impact, the energy explodes violently against the target.

~From the tower's summit, hurl the roaring beast

 

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OoC: Such "innocent" and nothing meaning "god-modding"s aren't even worth to mention... the thing he just thought just for a second isn't gonna change your character in any way. Don't get nervous from pointless things.

 

"I said it's useless to hit me such simple tricks, can't you understand it allready!!!", Saizen said and took the fist with his bare palm, but that was a bit bad idea as the reiatsu exploded at him sending him flying to the forest...

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Saizen got back to his feet. he got little burning marks on his palm he had used for blocking.

"Damn that Captain and his kidou's. This little catfightning must stop.", he said while looking at Zak up in the air. Saizen took a calming breath and shut his eyes for a moment. When he again opened his eyes they had a different look in them. It was not the calm ones, he usually had. The eyes were like Panther's who had found it's prey or like male lions who was gonna protect his territory from a stranger. The eyes glowing of murderous intent and they were looking straight at the Captain above Saizen, who had took a tighter grip from his sword and appeared in front of Zak and slashing. But this was faster... much faster and stronger than the last ones.

"I've finally found my feelings to kill you, Zzzzak-kun.", Saizen said just before the slash in a very threatening tone with a smile. The smile that wasn't definitely there because he was happy.

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"very well then,i forgot to introduce my self,my name is Raiden harribel espada numero dos(number 2)"

then raiden vanished and appeared a foot away from akioshi(Ooc:sorry if i mispelled his name) and charged his sword at Akioshi's back

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