quarter Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 this is the sheet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superexex Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 OCG is bad:Gala is spelled with capital letterPay 500 Life Points, not Pay five hundred life pointsMissed capital letter and missed "dot" (sorry I really don't know what it's called) 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ģค๓blє Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 Try; When this card attacks an opponent's monster, you can destroy it with this card's effect. When you do this, you must pay 1000 Life Points. I was to OP. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 OCG Fix:When this card attacks an opponent's monster, you can pay 500 (I'd put 1000) Life Points. If you do, destroy the monster with this card's effect without applying damage calculation. Also, there are capitalisation errors, and the effect is rather basic (an adaption of "Drilloid"'s) 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ayy lmao Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 OCG Fix:When this card attacks an opponent's monster' date=' you can pay 500 [i'](I'd put 1000)[/i] Life Points. If you do, destroy the monster with this card's effect without applying damage calculation. Also, there are capitalisation errors, and the effect is rather basic (an adaption of "Drilloid"'s) 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 To simple of an effect. Pic is good but bad OCG. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ihop Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 OCG needs work.Pic is good and effect is good.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 this is s*** fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 pic is good, effect too simple, and OCG is bad 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yogg-Saron Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 Whats with the title? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 pic is good' date=' effect too simple, and OCG is bad 3/10[/quote'] this... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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