My lightning cards [spell and trap cards] for my now set

[ĎλЯклξššζ]

First of all Blue Lightning

 

And now Deviation Lightning

 

Never foget Lightning & Tornado

 

Now Multiple lightning strikes

 

Its time for Red Lightning

 

Finally White Lightning

 

These cards are for my new set I call it (The Power Of Evil THE ULTIMATE REVENGE)

 

And as a gift one of my strongest cards Red eyes terror dragon

If you couldn't read the effect there it is ::::::: ((([ By sending this card from the field and remove it out, you can attack the opponent field with 200000 attack power destroying every card that have the same attack power or less.(Including magic and trap card). You can special summon this card again by taking out 800 atk points and stop using the first effect along the game after this special summon. ])))

 

Please rate me and give me your comments.

HOPE YOU LIKE THEM

see ya

[Agaming]

OCG errors you need to improve on you effects, but nice try

[Max Darkness]

Nice try, but there are a lot of problems:

 

Blue Lightning

i) Monster Card effects take presendence over Spell/Trap card effects; so of the monster card says you can negate the Spell effect, the Spell is negated.

ii) OCG: Destroy 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field.

 

Deviation Lightning

i) You might have meant "Deactivation Lightning".

ii) Turn this into a Quick-Play Spell Card

iii) OCG: Activate only when your opponent activates a card effect. Negate the effect and destroy the card.

 

Lightning and Tornado

i) This is "Raigeki", but stupidly overpowered.

ii) For example, you destroy 5 monsters and 5 Spell/Traps and your opponent loses 20,000 LP...overpowered much?

iii) Rethink this card completely.

 

Multiple Lightning Strikes

i) Turn into a Continuous Spell Card.

ii) Change effect to this:

As long as this card remains face-up on the field, once per turn, during your Standby Phase, Special Summon 1 "Lightning Warrior" (Now make that card as an Effect Monster) in face-up Defense Position from your hand, Deck or Graveyard.

 

Red Lightning

i) Name is a bit same. Try "Crimson Bolt"

ii) Again, incredibly overpowered.

iii) Example, you destroy "Blue-Eyes Ultimate" and your opponent loses 12,000 LP or you gain 12,000 LP...

iv) An interesting idea, but re-work it.

 

White Lightning

i) This is too similar to 'Multiple Lightning Strikes'

ii) Come up with different effect.

 

Overall, nice idea...but flawed execution (lots of OCG errors).

 

PM me if you need help.

 

2/10

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P.S. As for Red-Eyes Terror Dragon:

i) The pic is what would be Red-Eyes Ultimate

ii) Could the effect be more overpowered?

iii) Epic fail.

 

Fail/10

[Agaming]

no one fails some people just need to improve just don't be so harsh

[Max Darkness]

no one fails some people just need to improve just don't be so harsh

 

Very well.

 

Red-Eyes Terror Dragon's pic does not fit in with the card; the OCG is awful; the effect is just unbelievably and stupidly overpowered: 200' date='000 ATK?! or did you just press the 0 for too long?; and once it's Special Summoned, it still has 2000 ATK, and of course your opponent has no defence anymore.

 

[i']Improve[/i] all of the above.

[lacikus]

Last card is very very OP.