Zeaux Posted July 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 Thanks 40card :D 1 + rep to you ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shonen Jump™ Posted July 2, 2009 Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 <3 The cards and luffing the FW image and liek no ocg errors 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted July 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 Thank you too Shonen ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Riku~ Posted July 2, 2009 Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 I've never seen you make a set before, but this one's awesome! 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted July 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2009 I made 2 sets, they are called Berserker's Beasts and the other is Prodigious Demon (Prodigious Demons is my best set so far) but I think this one will be even more good. Ah thanx for the rate Yugiohfreak ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted July 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ilikesharks2020 Posted July 3, 2009 Report Share Posted July 3, 2009 I dont think the cards are that Op'd. Not many OCG errors. I like the pictures. 9/10 Good cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted July 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2009 Thanks ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lily Posted July 3, 2009 Report Share Posted July 3, 2009 I dont see any OCG, pictures fit everything. Some could be a little better, but it doesn't matter because the others make up for it. 9.9/10 (Send me the links to the images beside the last 2 and 3rd please!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted July 3, 2009 Report Share Posted July 3, 2009 the new ones are great^^OCG solidImages great9/10for the new ones Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted July 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2009 Thanks Prag and Wanderley Prag: I will send you the picture credit after OK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted July 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 4, 2009 *NEW - Koair Ligraus* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 4, 2009 Report Share Posted July 4, 2009 rather impressive concept. ;) i like the synergy that these guys get from their summon requirements. This leads to them being more balanced. While i was reading each of these effects i didnt once have the "OVERPOWERED" trigger get switched in my head. and that is something, since that happens often. ;) the effects are short, simple, and effective. That, too, is impressive. The art is stunning! Some of the art is from this site, but other art i have not seen before. Would you mind if i asked where you got your art? i might would like to use it on a mini-series on my main thread here right now. that would be very useful.. The OCG was pretty near perfect. I may have seen a few errors, but nothing too bad to point out. i must say, this is rather impressive. I am happy that someone has taken as much time as i have to promote professionalism. ;) [9/10] .kale Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Impact Posted July 4, 2009 Report Share Posted July 4, 2009 these seem very thought out and work with one another like a set SHOULD be i have not seen a such a well flowing set when it comes to pics and effects in a long time good job my man. u have given me inspiration............. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Stoner-™ Posted July 4, 2009 Report Share Posted July 4, 2009 Great Set, i'm not going to rate them individualy, so i'm going to rate them as a Set. I might go back and fix all OCG mistakes, if there is any, later on. Names - 8/10.Pics - 9/10.Effects - 9/10.Total - 26/30. Keep It Up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyson Posted July 4, 2009 Report Share Posted July 4, 2009 Leon is cool, constantly posing a threat by having the right monsters to remove, while waiting out something to tune with. 8/10. Leonar is interesting, if you can feed its effect with the right monsters, again. These seem a little situational, but situational is fun at times. 7/10. Guardian is crazy, and I think you should mention something about not being able to use his effect for his own effect, like "except "Koair Guardian"" or something. A lot of potential ugly self-comboing. Pick up a Koair, mill cards to summon it, you milled for "Koair" so you draw again, repeat.. funny. 6/10. Minorius is pretty fair. The potential to either sacrifice one card of yours, or put it down when you're already a few cards ahead is interesting. A couple good first turn plays. 8/10. I like Prince. The flexibility to spend his Tribute by sending 1 card you need from your Deck to the Graveyard is rather useful, and the protection from Traps (and clear potential to protect from Spells) makes him pretty formidable. There aren't a horrible load of targetting Spells still running around, but this would stop them dead in their tracks. <_< 7/10. Garuz is... okay. Switching it to defense position and increasing its ATK doesn't seem all that worthwhile, but it can have a little utility with being a Tuner and whatnot. 7/10. Brutalis is OH JESUS. 6* with a potential 4800 ATK? That's a big punch. The cooldown for only 1400 ATK is pretty nasty, though, and the backlash it provides, outside of pushing for a giant OTK, makes it fairly balanced. 8/10. Beast's Rage is cool. Dragon's Rage with an added on effect for its destruction. The potential comboability with it (though making it only your opponent's Spell effect was a smart move) is good, and it can provide a constant annoyance. 9/10. Chaos Destruction Thunder Spear is pretty wicked. I like the effect and the weirdness of it, and how the monster can pretty easily pump itself back up if an attack would put it in danger. This is actually really useful, and halving the ATK of it to hamper its use during the Battle Phase (unless you felt risky and wanted to use it in the Main Phase 2) is pretty cool, as well. 9/10. Endless Battle is.... fffffff. 7/10. Ligraus is pretty mean. You have a lot of potential to shut down a bunch of your opponent's moves. Re-summoning it during the End Phase does not seem necessary. It's like Stardust Dragon/Assault Mode, except with a little cost tagged on. The only real outs are Mind Crushing it or removing your whole Graveyard from play. This would be a sick late game play. Just a little OP. 4/10. This set overall looks pretty nice, some high points and low points throughout. 8/10. Good set, Zeaux. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted July 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 4, 2009 Thanks Kale, Auxiliary, Sir Big and Skyson @Skyson: About the Garuz, I typed the effect wrong, it should increase its DEF not ATK ^_^' My fault. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted July 4, 2009 Report Share Posted July 4, 2009 [align=center]Koair Fury's SetKoair Leon -Card Effect- This card can only be Normal Summoned by sending the top card from your Deck to the Graveyard. During both player's Battle Phase' date='[/b'] you can remove 1 monster from your Graveyard from play. If you do, this card gains ATK equal to the Level of the monster x 100 until the End Phase. Koair Leonar -Card Effect- This card can only be Normal Summoned by discarding 1 card. When this card is attacked you can return it to your hand and Special Summon 1 monster from your hand whose Level is equal to the Level of the monster that attacked this card. A monster Special Summoned by this effect is sent to the Graveyard during your next End Phase. Koair Guardian -Card Effect- Each time a card is sent to the Graveyard by the effect of a "Koair" Monster, draw 1 card. If the card drawn was a "Koair" Monster, you can send cards from the top of your Deck equal to the Level of the monster to Special Summon it. Koair Minorius -Card Effect- This card can only be Normal Summoned by sending 1 card you control to the Graveyard. If you control 3 or more cards, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. Each time this card battles, decrease its ATK by 100. If this card destroys a monster by battle you can add 1 monster from your Deck whose Level is equal to the destroyed monster OR Special Summon 1 monster from your hand whose Level is lower than the destroyed monster. Koair Prince -Card Effect- This card can only be Normal Summoned by sending 1 card from your Deck to the Graveyard. As long you control a "Koair" Monster other than "Koair Prince", this card is unaffected by the effects of Trap Cards your opponent controls. If this card is targeted by the effect of a Spell Card, you can remove 1 monster from your Graveyard from play to negate and destroy it. Koair Garuz -Card Effect- This card can only be Normal Summoned by sending 1 "Koair" Monster from your Deck to the Graveyard. When this card is Summoned and it is the only monster you control, change it to Defense Position and increase its ATK by the number of the cards in your opponent's hand x 200. When this card is attacked, you can remove 2 "Koair" Monsters from your Graveyard from play to increase the DEF of this card by the Level of the attacking monster x 100. Koair Brutalis -Card Effect- When this card is Synchro Summoned, remove 3 "Koair" Monsters from your Graveyard from play. If you cannot, destroy this card. Once per turn, you can remove 1 "Koair" Monster from your Graveyard from play to double the ATK of this card until the End Phase. If you activated this effect, half the ATK of this card during the End Phase until your next Standby Phase. Beast's Rage -Card Effect- When a Beast, Beast-Warrior or Winged Beast-Type monster on your side of the field attacks with an ATK that is higher than the DEF of a Defense Position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points. If this card is destroyed by a Spell Card's effect your opponent controls, Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower Beast, Beast-Warrior or Winged Beast-Type from your Deck. Chaos Destruction Thunder Spear -Card Effect- Equip only to a Warrior or Beast-Warrior-Type monster. Once per turn, you can half the ATK of the monster equipped with this card to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field. During your opponent's Battle Phase, if the monster equipped with this card is attacked you can remove from play 1 monster from your Graveyard to double the ATK of 1 monster you control until the End Phase. Endless Battle -Card Effect- Activate only when a monster you control is destroyed by battle. Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster and 1 Level 4 or lower monster to your opponent's field. They cannot be destroyed by battle or used as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon. Level 4 or lower monster can only attack a Level 4 or lower monster. If 1 of the monsters Special Summoned by this effect is destroyed, remove all Level 4 or lower monsters from the field from play. Koair Ligraus -Card Effect- This card can only be Normal Summoned by sending 1 card from your Deck to the Graveyard. When your opponent activates a card effect, you can return this card to your hand and remove 1 card from your Graveyard from play to negate and destroy it. If this card is returned to your hand by this effect, you can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon it during the End Phase.[/font][/align] Great cards! I have corrected some OCG errors, not so many so that's good! All the cards have an ok balance (it seems). And overall, great set Zeaux! 9/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted July 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 4, 2009 Thanks devastator :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gecko666 Posted July 5, 2009 Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 finally beasts and beast-warriors get the attention they deserve :Dvery cool cards and I like the pics aswell oh and very good effects 10/10 ps: where did you found those pics?and I wish I could make good cards like you but I have trouble with making up good effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted July 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 Don't worry gecko, you will learn with the timeI will send you some of the pictures as a PM OK? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starsky Posted July 5, 2009 Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 soooooooooooooooo coool i wish i could make cards like that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gecko666 Posted July 5, 2009 Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 sure send some pictures if you wantthank's in advance :D I'll probably start making cards one of these days :D and keep on making those excellent cards plz. :D :D :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted July 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 Be sure to read the OCG thread before (It is really helpful) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cypress Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 i love it, when i first saw the effects, it reminded me of LS a little Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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