Transformers Pack, Quick draft of cards (CARD ISSUES FIXED)

[rogerdoger70]

I made a quick draft of some Transformers cards (Super original I know -_-)

Tell me what you think, and also I realize there are OCG errors and one picture IMO is bad (Ratchets)

[Sora]

Pretty good, but some OCG errors and the cards are overpowered.

 

Bumblebee - When this card is destroyed, you can pay 600 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Optimus Prime-Autobot Leader" from your hand or Deck.

 

Optimus - If this card is Special Summoned, you can Summon 1 monster with "Autobot" in its name from your hand or Deck.

 

Ratchet - You can pay 700 Life Points to Special Summon 1 monster with "Autobot" in its name from your Graveyard. *When this card is destroyed, destroy the monster Special Summoned from the Graveyard.* *xxxxx* means I don't know how to correct it and tried my best.

 

Jazz - When this card is destroyed by battle, you can pay 600 Life Points to place this card on the top of your Deck.

 

Again, its pretty good, 7/10 effects are kinda basic like "Summon this Summon that".

[rogerdoger70]

Pretty good' date=' but some OCG errors and the cards are overpowered.

 

Bumblebee - When this card is destroyed, you can pay 600 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Optimus Prime-Autobot Leader" from your hand or Deck.

 

Optimus - If this card is Special Summoned, you can Summon 1 monster with "Autobot" in its name from your hand or Deck.

 

Ratchet - You can pay 700 Life Points to Special Summon 1 monster with "Autobot" in its name from your Graveyard. *When this card is destroyed, destroy the monster Special Summoned from the Graveyard.* *xxxxx* means I don't know how to correct it and tried my best.

 

Jazz - When this card is destroyed by battle, you can pay 600 Life Points to place this card on the top of your Deck.

 

Again, its pretty good, 7/10 effects are kinda basic like "Summon this Summon that".

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thanks for the corrections, and I tried to keep the effects simple so you don't have to read a whole bunch on the card and the point of the effect gets across to people easily.

[rogerdoger70]

bump

[duel tester]

the cards i see are good!

 

but i wonder should the transformers cards

work with morphtronic cards

 

like heres an example

 

bumbblebee-autobot

the folowing monster gets the designated effects depending on witch mode its in

Atack-this monster gains 400 atack when this monster atacks a monster in defence mode

distroy the monster after battle calulation

Defence- when this monster is atacked by removing from play one machine monster from the graveyard negate the atack

when this card is distroyed in battle pay 600 lifepoints to specal sumon one optimus prime leader of the autobots from your hand or deck

 

thats just a idea of what i expect a 10/10 trasformeres to look like

but thats just a idea.. your cards are geting a 8/10

[rogerdoger70]

not to be mean about your suggestion but.. What are you talking about? Your grammar is bad and the explanation wasn't clear.

[duel tester]

i ment make your cards work with the Morphtronics cards

heres a quick history leson

 

Morphtronics, known as Deformers in the Japanese versions, are an Archetype of monsters debuting in Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D's. They are used by Leo (Rua in Japanese) in the anime, and were introduced in the Set "Crossroads of Chaos". They're continued in the sets, Crimson Crisis and Raging Battle. Their effects are dictated by their Battle Position.

 

They are depicted in how they "morph" when they change their Battle Position, which changes their effect and appearance (humanoid form in Attack Position; item form in Defense Position). They transform into small household items, like magnets and mobile phones. Despite their appearances, Morphtronics are not all Machine type monsters and they also represent a wide array of Attributes. These cards may be based on the entire transformers toyline that are still very popular.

 

what i was trying to say was why dont you make these transformers cards work with

morphtronic monsters.

 

and yes i do have bad spelling

deal with it!!!

anyway i was trying to give a sugestion on how you might improve your monsters

to "transform" them into cards that go well with existing cards.

thats all..

[summers307]

Pretty good' date=' but some OCG errors and the cards are overpowered.

 

Bumblebee - When this card is destroyed, you can pay 600 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Optimus Prime-Autobot Leader" from your hand or Deck.

 

Optimus - If this card is Special Summoned, you can Summon 1 monster with "Autobot" in its name from your hand or Deck.

 

Ratchet - You can pay 700 Life Points to Special Summon 1 monster with "Autobot" in its name from your Graveyard. *When this card is destroyed, destroy the monster Special Summoned from the Graveyard.* *xxxxx* means I don't know how to correct it and tried my best.

 

Jazz - When this card is destroyed by battle, you can pay 600 Life Points to place this card on the top of your Deck.

 

Again, its pretty good, 7/10 effects are kinda basic like "Summon this Summon that".

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I agree with this guy!

 

One more note: I (me and only me, but feel free to agree) think the names should be reversed. "Autobot" should be the beginning of the names, and THEN it should be Bumblebee, Optimus, etc.

 

This is my opinion, use or don't use it as you see fit.

[hero2die]

i like this set because i like transformers^^

and the effects are pretty good

U do a nice Job:mrgreen:

10/10

[rogerdoger70]

Thanks for the input, and just to say when I make my cards I don't do any of that new stuff in 5ds or the one that introduced the "elemental and destiny heroes" I make my cards using things up to the three Egyptian gods thing.