Dark Deities Cards Almost Finished

[Ministryman]

I'm only a few cards away from finishing my Dark Deity Deck.

I added more cards to support the Deities.

 

[AbbatonStrikes]

Galliath: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing every monster card from your Graveyard. This card gains 1000 ATK points for every monster removed by this effect. On the turn this card is summoned destroy all cards on the field except this card.

 

(A bit too powerful to be honnest 1000 ATK points with just 4 or 5 monster cards you'd have 4000-5000 attack monster, You have to remove 7 different monsters to get Rainbow Dark Dragon and he was only 4000 ATK points!! I would make it more 300-500 ATK points and also remove the last part bring it down a level or 2 and your there!! Hope the re-write helped a little its mostly capital letters, also you cant put ALSO after a full stop its a continuing word like and). 7/10

 

Hannibal: When this card is Normal or Special Summoned remove the top 5 cards from your DEck. Inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent for every Spell and Trap Card discarded by this effect.

 

(Like it alot this effect, again just the capitals need working on). 8.5/10

 

Red Moon: All Zombie-Type monsters on your side of the field gain 300 ATK points during your opponent's Battle Pahse.

 

(Nice simple effective, when using types write it like above, also attributes are in capitals like this DARK, LIGHT etc). 8/10

 

Hope this all helps keep working at these they look like a promising set of cards!!!

[Ministryman]

I will work on them some more. These are just rough drafts not the real effects.

[.Leo]

this cards look good. i agree with all the fixes AbbatonStrikes gave and another one is that Haas, the Greedy Swampking has black bars around the pic so you should get a new pic