Azmodius Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Yeah, the discharge were always my favorite. I like the sort of "Dark" feel they have compared to the others. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Yeah' date=' the discharge were always my favorite. I like the sort of "Dark" feel they have compared to the others.[/quote'] They do have a dark feel to them, dont they? :D ironic, since they were defeated by the DEs.. Have you read my fic before? you might get a kick out of it, since the main character uses these cards you are fond of.. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 So many cards. Well, let's start. Ghost Knight: His ability can only summon a Synchro from the Graveyard if it was properly summoned in the first place, right? Not a proble, i'm just curious really. Keech: Perhaps by sending a Discharge monster from your Graveyard to your deck he can neutralize the damage? Just adds something to it, adding cards to the deck is rarely a good idea unless you get something for it, after all. Even Lightsworn should have won by the time their deck has thinned that much. Irith: Increasing Life Points is rarely considered, so i'd amp up the increase, especially considering how fast this Deck can gobble up your own Life Points, and how the damage can sometimes exceed it. Alas all i have time for at the moment, i'll be back to check out the rest!*Note to self* I was up to Dark Emanater - Koremar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 So many cards. Well' date=' let's start. Ghost Knight: His ability can only summon a Synchro from the Graveyard if it was properly summoned in the first place, right? Not a proble, i'm just curious really. [b']i think you mean Future Warrior, since Ghost Knight doesnt have a Special Summon ability like that, and Future Warrior does. His effect means that you can only use that ability if he is a level 4, so if you used his other ability to make him a level 2, that effect is null. ;) [/b] Keech: Perhaps by sending a Discharge monster from your Graveyard to your deck he can neutralize the damage? Just adds something to it, adding cards to the deck is rarely a good idea unless you get something for it, after all. Even Lightsworn should have won by the time their deck has thinned that much. good point, i will change if i havent used that effect in the fic yet. Irith: Increasing Life Points is rarely considered, so i'd amp up the increase, especially considering how fast this Deck can gobble up your own Life Points, and how the damage can sometimes exceed it. also a good point, i will change soon. Alas all i have time for at the moment, i'll be back to check out the rest!*Note to self* I was up to Dark Emanater - Koremar. Wow, you are looking at them all? you didnt have to do that.. :D thank you so much.. take your time, by all means! :D the bold are my responses. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 God Kale, I'm sorry for not seeing this thread earlier, I really am. Tomorrow if I have no plans, I'll review every single card in this thread for you, but right now, its far too much, lol. You should be proud that your set has over 20 cards in it. Thats an achievement on its own. Your cardmaking is incredibly impressive, bud. To my knowledge, you've never made a bad card that I've seen. Your cards are all up-to-snuff as they've always been. Thanks Kale for your awesome contribution to the site. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Wow, thanks Hunter! You don't have to review every card, that's a far to big of a request. :) but you can sure say which ones are your favorites, if you want. It's okay that you didn't see it. ;) better late than never? Thank you so much for stopping by, I didn't know that all of you would respond to the PM. :D now you see how much respect I have for you guys.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 Bleh, you're right. That's what happens when you look at one card while typing about another. I do like the Ghost Knight, a very cool secret rare. Gargojii: I think this card should be a rare. You could splash this card nicely in quite a few decks. Also, perhaps make it a limited card? I don't quite know why I feel this way about this card... Aahh well, I think you should take a look at it though. Ponikame: You might want to add somewhere in the effect "You can activate this effect during your opponent's turn", especially for the DEF. Banutuji: Nothing much, but at the end you forgot to say where you Special Summon the DE from, although i'm pretty sure it's from the graveyard. Jimatukame: I think his "3 or more" ability should be more like sending the top card from your deck rather then a card from your hand to get the increase. The effect only activates when he is Special Summoned, and only during the Damage Step.I think it has enough conditions and competition to make the 'cost' a little more friendly, if not a touch of a bonus. Kokometu: Forgot the 'based on the amount of Dark Emanater in your Graveyard' section, or however it should be said. Discharge Blasting Cell: I'd consider different effects to the gain and decrease. Perhaps you can take no damage for the turn, or a more substantial gain. But the adding a monster effect is fine. And that's all the problems i think i found. But they're all pretty awesome, and i wish you luck with the rest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 Bleh' date=' you're right. That's what happens when you look at one card while typing about another. I do like the Ghost Knight, a very cool secret rare. [b']Thanks! i appreciate you taking the time to look at all of these.. :D[/b] Gargojii: I think this card should be a rare. You could splash this card nicely in quite a few decks. Also, perhaps make it a limited card? I don't quite know why I feel this way about this card... Aahh well, I think you should take a look at it though. lulz, i love how the only thing you hate is that it isnt real enough.. :D thanks! i actually feel the same way.. Ponikame: You might want to add somewhere in the effect "You can activate this effect during your opponent's turn", especially for the DEF. That has been suggested before, i think i will change that. thanks! Banutuji: Nothing much, but at the end you forgot to say where you Special Summon the DE from, although i'm pretty sure it's from the graveyard. Oops, my bad.. i was in a rush to make it, it was the final card i was making at the time. ;) excuses or not, i will change it. Jimatukame: I think his "3 or more" ability should be more like sending the top card from your deck rather then a card from your hand to get the increase. The effect only activates when he is Special Summoned, and only during the Damage Step.I think it has enough conditions and competition to make the 'cost' a little more friendly, if not a touch of a bonus. Good point, i will consider changing that, because i have horrible hand control in the DEs, and that has to be part of it. Kokometu: Forgot the 'based on the amount of Dark Emanater in your Graveyard' section, or however it should be said. i will review that to see if i meant to do that or not. Discharge Blasting Cell: I'd consider different effects to the gain and decrease. Perhaps you can take no damage for the turn, or a more substantial gain. But the adding a monster effect is fine. that card was, truly, a fail card idea, and i only included it in this pack because it was in 1 episode of TC. But i will change it to make it more worth the while of playing it. And that's all the problems i think i found. But they're all pretty awesome, and i wish you luck with the rest. Wow, really? Nothing is wrong with the DS, or the new Allies? :D Nothing wrong with the support? i would understand if you stopped about half way, i mean, there are tons of cards here.. :D i rather think i did a way better job with the Allies now, since they seem more synergous with the Resolve monsters. Yeah, i just made a new word. ;) thank you so much for your input! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 I heard prizes =OJust kidding. ;D But yeah, either I am blind, or you haven't posted Synchros for some reason :? EDIT: Nevermind, I see them. Love the Slayer one =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuro no Keiyakushu Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 These cards are AWESOME like you have no idea....or maybe you do 0.o Anyway, you said "Please Also realize that none of the art is mine. If you would like to know whom i use, please just ask. It isnt a secret." so does that mean you would give out the source? So here now, I am asking where did you get those pix? I REALLLLLLY WANNNA KNOW!!! =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 I heard prizes =OJust kidding. ;D But yeah' date=' either I am blind, or you haven't posted Synchros for some reason :? EDIT: Nevermind, I see them. Love the Slayer one =D[/quote'] i will give out yesterday's prizes soon, dont worry. ;) and i was like, wtf? when you said i didnt have synchros.. you like my Ally Sync? well, just you wait for the Level 10! :D These cards are AWESOME like you have no idea....or maybe you do 0.o Anyway' date=' you said "Please Also realize that none of the art is mine. If you would like to know whom i use, please just ask. It isnt a secret." so does that mean you would give out the source? So here now, I am asking where did you get those pix? I REALLLLLLY WANNNA KNOW!!! =D[/quote'] thanks for the post. ;) anywho, i use many different sources, such as Jason Engle, YCM members such as Wolf and others, deviantart members, photobucket members, Dark Magic Vortex, and mtgstaples gallery. ;) googling them might work, im too lazy to find all of the links. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 Sorry Kale, i got this far, then the page stopped loading. >.< I'll comment on the rest later. Ghost Knight-Solid Card. Actually Playable. Future Warrior-This card would be epic if it were treated as a Tuner when its Special Summoned. Kosmos Striker-A bit too multipurposed. Gold Armor-Love this card, its superb. Solid concept and everything. Crimson Armor-Same as above. Daemon of Alliance-Solid Card, decent purpose. Nothing too special though. Daemon of Hatred-Same as above. Arm of the Fallen-Love the union support. Great card. Armor of Synthesis-Tuner and Union. Multipurposed in the perfect way. Head of the Risen-I love these cards. xD Grivelle The Discharge Kindler-Nice support for the Archtype. Alede the Discharge Amalgamate-Underpowered. =/ Cobun the Discharge Spirit-Playable. Makes Discharge's worth playing. Kreech the Discharge Rider-He works with all of the others. Pycer the Discharge Knight-OCG, bud. Meh, I wouldn't use it. Iengy the Discharge Combatant-I wouldn't use it with the others. Emerke the Discharge Marauder-Tokens & meh =/ Tibruu the Discharge Slasher-No one skips their Draw Phase. xD Unplayable. Ky the Discharge Power Collector-Token manipulation. Not really playable. Kiber the Discharge Crystler-This actually makes all of the cards playable. Good show. Irith the Discharge Commander-Meh, its only really good as a beatstick. Curinthiz the Discharge Opressor-Every archtype needs a large monster. Gawaroth the Discharge Dragon-I like this card. Playable using the rest of the set. Koremar-I made that one! xD Love it. Garojii-Playable, I like it. Ponikame-Not fond of this one. Iliciil-I enjoy this card. Works with them all. Kimega-Same as above. Banutuji-Same as above. Jimatukame-I love all of these cards. xD Doruukji-Love this one too. Kokometu-Guess my comment? xD Shinjoki-I'd play these in real life. Lorunenji-Lol, Make more of these! Ninjenutuki-Epic cards are epic. Xinthi the Assimilate Scanner-Ally support, Yay! Solid Card. Yematuga the Water Resolve-Ally Cards love this. Simetu the Wind Resolve-Dont care for this one as much. Muyatak the Earth Resolve-This one is great. Albiien the Familiar Castor-Solid Card. Biex the Frontline Vanguard-Not bad. You could use it. Siexu the Bursting Spark-I love this one. ;D Jyruun the Balking Zephyr-Oooh, I like this one. I'd use it. Kuure the Prodigal Force-Is that Christina Agulara? xD jkjkSolid card. Gymeru the Fissure Castor-Nothing too special. Solid card. Firedun the Swamp Impportal-How's that a Zombie? Oh well. Support is support. Bunkre the Discharge Mage-Finally, a Discharge Synchro. I like it. Ziranat the Discharge Hellion-OMG!!! Big scary fire dragon FTW. Love it. Dark Matter Wyvern Cannon-Name doesn't fit. =/ I think this is a bit over powered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 I heard prizes =OJust kidding. ;D But yeah' date=' either I am blind, or you haven't posted Synchros for some reason :? EDIT: Nevermind, I see them. Love the Slayer one =D[/quote'] i will give out yesterday's prizes soon, dont worry. ;) and i was like, wtf? when you said i didnt have synchros.. you like my Ally Sync? well, just you wait for the Level 10! :D These cards are AWESOME like you have no idea....or maybe you do 0.o Anyway' date=' you said "Please Also realize that none of the art is mine. If you would like to know whom i use, please just ask. It isnt a secret." so does that mean you would give out the source? So here now, I am asking where did you get those pix? I REALLLLLLY WANNNA KNOW!!! =D[/quote'] thanks for the post. ;) anywho, i use many different sources, such as Jason Engle, YCM members such as Wolf and others, deviantart members, photobucket members, Dark Magic Vortex, and mtgstaples gallery. ;) googling them might work, im too lazy to find all of the links. Don't be lazy. =DStill, I hate this: When you try to make a set, and do the best to what you can in a certain amount of time, you edit the first post, and say there is an update, nobody comes, which is happening to me, and somebody keeps rating my thread, 1st 4, then 3rd, then 2nd <_<''Care to help me out with my thread? I mean, I did some good cards, but I mean, I just got to 13, it's not like I have a whole giant set waiting for everybody -___- Some people aren't that considerate these days. Still, can;t wait for the rest to be up ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 Hunter! Thank you so much for that! :D basically i agree with all of your comments.. ;) im glad you like these.. you should read the fic to see them in action. :D its pretty schweet that you are giving me a quick tidbit on all of the cards. ;) i appreciate that a whole lot.. :D +rep. Lucifer, that is exactly the problem i had yesterday. ;) i will see your thread as soon as i can, i am currently writing chapter 10 of my fic. ;) please send me a link to it via PM, then i am less likely to forget. :D thank you for the comments! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuro no Keiyakushu Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 I heard prizes =OJust kidding. ;D But yeah' date=' either I am blind, or you haven't posted Synchros for some reason :? EDIT: Nevermind, I see them. Love the Slayer one =D[/quote'] i will give out yesterday's prizes soon, dont worry. ;) and i was like, wtf? when you said i didnt have synchros.. you like my Ally Sync? well, just you wait for the Level 10! :D These cards are AWESOME like you have no idea....or maybe you do 0.o Anyway' date=' you said "Please Also realize that none of the art is mine. If you would like to know whom i use, please just ask. It isnt a secret." so does that mean you would give out the source? So here now, I am asking where did you get those pix? I REALLLLLLY WANNNA KNOW!!! =D[/quote'] thanks for the post. ;) anywho, i use many different sources, such as Jason Engle, YCM members such as Wolf and others, deviantart members, photobucket members, Dark Magic Vortex, and mtgstaples gallery. ;) googling them might work, im too lazy to find all of the links. thanks =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 youre welcome. ;) i dont want to deprive anyone of good art.. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuro no Keiyakushu Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 youre welcome. ;) i dont want to deprive anyone of good art.. :D BTW, I'm using your Divine Sanction - Ghost Knight pic, but who do I give credit to? I wouldn't want to be ripping anyone's pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 youre welcome. ;) i dont want to deprive anyone of good art.. :D BTW' date=' I'm using your Divine Sanction - Ghost Knight pic, but who do I give credit to? I wouldn't want to be ripping anyone's pic.[/quote'] Ghost Knight i found as a render on Photobucket, and i added the background. so.. its half mine. I dont remember my link off the top of my head, but i can sure find it if you dearly want it.. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuro no Keiyakushu Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 youre welcome. ;) i dont want to deprive anyone of good art.. :D BTW' date=' I'm using your Divine Sanction - Ghost Knight pic, but who do I give credit to? I wouldn't want to be ripping anyone's pic.[/quote'] Ghost Knight i found as a render on Photobucket, and i added the background. so.. its half mine. I dont remember my link off the top of my head, but i can sure find it if you dearly want it.. ;) Just give me like the name of the render as you found it so I can find it myself. Wouldn't want to put you through any trouble =D I'm just using the pic for a card in my fan fic. It will be a TRUMP CARD =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w177/Susy23_album/Renders/Anime.png?t=1246044472 there you go. ;) strangely, Ghost Knight is the card to get the trumps in my set for my fic. ;) i hope you make something nice with it.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuro no Keiyakushu Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w177/Susy23_album/Renders/Anime.png?t=1246044472 there you go. ;) strangely' date=' Ghost Knight is the card to get the trumps in my set for my fic. ;) i hope you make something nice with it..[/quote'] Thanks! I can also make a sig with this....YES! And a booster...gotta practice with that. I'll read your fan-fic since your set is interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 I love every single one of them! Every card is just lovely to look at. But you do have some minor OCG errors, I'm afraid. But, seeing as you put so much effort into making each and every one, I will not bother to tell you all of them. If you do want them, just PM me. :) But these cards aren't just the ordinarily flashy cards with highly complicated effects, rather than being simplistic and easy to understand. Your cards are easy to understand, allthough some of them have really long texts, one shouldn't just quickly read through the lines of the cards and then jump over to the next card, but closely and thoroughly study the cards to see the art you make. Once again, you have not disappointed me, Kale. Your cards are eye-candy and treasures to behold, and I will gladly wait for the next editions. Best of wishes, Soul. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Thanks! I can also make a sig with this....YES! And a booster...gotta practice with that. I'll read your fan-fic since your set is interesting. that would be awesome if you could read my fan fic! a link is in my sig. ;) I love every single one of them! Every card is just lovely to look at. But you do have some minor OCG errors' date=' I'm afraid. But, seeing as you put so much effort into making each and every one, I will not bother to tell you all of them. If you do want them, just PM me. :) But these cards aren't just the ordinarily flashy cards with highly complicated effects, rather than being simplistic and easy to understand. Your cards are easy to understand, allthough some of them have really long texts, one shouldn't just quickly read through the lines of the cards and then jump over to the next card, but closely and thoroughly study the cards to see the art you make. Once again, you have not disappointed me, Kale. Your cards are eye-candy and treasures to behold, and I will gladly wait for the next editions. Best of wishes, Soul.[/quote'] I realize that i have OCG errors.. its simply not possible to not have any if i take on a project so big. ;) and i generally do anyway. thank you so much for stopping by! i know that these are mostly old cards, but i needed to redo them for my fan fic.. the next pack i make, titled Forced Strike, will have all sorts of brand-new cards, including about three new archetypes and expansions on all of the archetypes here, and even a few singles! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EnkoMaun Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 You've really worked hard on this, huh? Awesome effort, I loved reading the cards. 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 You've really worked hard on this' date=' huh? Awesome effort, I loved reading the cards. 9/10.[/quote'] hours and hours... :D thank you for stopping by. im glad you enjoyed it. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.