PakstraX Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 I'm creating a new set - Return of the Toons. It will feature five new toons, four of which will be toon synchro monsters and one toon tuner (Toon Krebons, featured bellow). [spoiler=Toon Krebons - the Toon-Tuner]Presenting...[align=center] [/align][align=justify] Card text: If you control a face-up "Toon World", you can Special Summon this card from your hand. When "Toon World" is destroyed, this card is also destroyed. If you control a face-up "Toon World" and your opponent does not control a Toon Monster, this card can attack your opponent directly. When this card is selected as an attack target, you can pay 800 Life Points to negate the attack. If you control a face-up "Toon World", you don't have to pay Life Points for this effect. [/align][align=center] [/align] It's not finished yet, as you can see, but it will be soon. [spoiler=Evolution]http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/6788/toonkrebons.jpg[/img] ... http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/6788/toonkrebons.jpg[/img] ... http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/4765/toonkrebonsuboji.jpg[/img] ... http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/3784/toonkrebonssaefekti2.jpg[/img] ... http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/9951/toonkrebonspozadinacut.jpg[/img]http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/6788/toonkrebons.jpg[/img] ... http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/6788/toonkrebons.jpg[/img] ... http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/4765/toonkrebonsuboji.jpg[/img] ... http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/3784/toonkrebonssaefekti2.jpg[/img] ... !!!Soon to come!!!- Crystal Beast Toon Pegasus What to expect in future sets: In future sets you could expect cards like Toon Rose Dragon, Toon Armed Dragon and many more... Everyone has forgotten that TOONS existed, so I wanted to bring them back :D. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 Great card. good job on the pic. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nnoobbeater Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 i agree with the dude above meps: plz go there, dont let them die :-( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 impressive effect, pic could use a little color, but that's it 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ilikesharks2020 Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 -1 No color on monster-1 No backround-1 Blurry on the dangly part of his hat-1 OCG Error:you don't have to pay for this effect. = you don't have to pay Life Points for this effect. -4 in all 6/10 Good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dairuga Posted July 2, 2009 Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 Well, great card =D It's nice to see some toon support, as it is a really cool, albeit fragile deck-type. And if you drew this card yourself, then nice work! As for his effect, I think you should perhaps remove the "If you control toonworld, you don't have to pay for this effect", as I think it makes this card a little over-the-top ^^; It's a toon monster that can survive without toon-world, it can negate attacks, and if Toon world is on the field, it can do it for free. It lacks the usual toon restrictions that says that it can't attack on it's first turn, it has to pay lifepoints to attack, or it can't exist without toon world, so I'd say that the free attack negation is a bit too good ^^; What if you tuned it down to 400 instead or something? Well, anyway, great job =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PakstraX Posted July 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 -1 No color on monster-1 No backround-1 Blurry on the dangly part of his hat-1 OCG Error:you don't have to pay for this effect. = you don't have to pay Life Points for this effect. -4 in all 6/10 Good job No color' date=' background, blurry dangly part - I said it's not finished!! Have you even read my comments? Even though I think that the OCG is OK, because it says you have to pay Life Points in the first part, and that adding once more "Life Points" is redundant, I'll change it... Well, great card =D It's nice to see some toon support, as it is a really cool, albeit fragile deck-type. And if you drew this card yourself, then nice work! As for his effect, I think you should perhaps remove the "If you control toonworld, you don't have to pay for this effect", as I think it makes this card a little over-the-top ^^; It's a toon monster that can survive without toon-world, it can negate attacks, and if Toon world is on the field, it can do it for free. It lacks the usual toon restrictions that says that it can't attack on it's first turn, it has to pay lifepoints to attack, or it can't exist without toon world, so I'd say that the free attack negation is a bit too good ^^; What if you tuned it down to 400 instead or something? Well, anyway, great job =) Toons are Under-Powered, so I had to make some a bit OP to even out the UP... If you compare for example LS and Toons, you'll see a BIG gap between them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cheeky leslie Posted July 2, 2009 Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 You forgot to include, in the second sentence: "... from your hand." I think that's how the text goes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PakstraX Posted July 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 Great Scott, your right! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PakstraX Posted July 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 Now at 50% done! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheOSC Posted July 2, 2009 Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 nice cant wait to see finished image =) good effect and image = great card 9/10 till the color comes in =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MARKYLAWD12 Posted July 2, 2009 Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 The Crd Is Really Good, I Like Toons8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PakstraX Posted July 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 The basic coloring finished! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 2, 2009 Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 Nice job with the colored version. MARKYLAWD12 I might report you for posting your own card on someone elses thread without their permission. -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted July 2, 2009 Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 I want to see more of your cards. NAO! Because that is awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PakstraX Posted July 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 Well, you can see my EGGS! XDNo really, they are in my sig, with my Sandwich Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dairuga Posted July 2, 2009 Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 Toons are Under-Powered, so I had to make some a bit OP to even out the UP... If you compare for example LS and Toons, you'll see a BIG gap between them. Well, no, actually, they aren't that underpowered. They just have a too big dependency on Toon world. I tried to play some games against a friend once, where he didn't need to use toon world, and it turned out that toons are really, really strong. I'd say what they need are more cards that can help get toon world, substitute it, and protect it. But yeah, if you compare them to Lightsworns, they are pretty unequal. And by the way, great job on the drawing, and nice progress. Do you have a deviantart account by any chance? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PakstraX Posted July 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 No, but I was thinking of making one... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dairuga Posted July 3, 2009 Report Share Posted July 3, 2009 Hehe, you should =) You seem like a really good artist, judging by your Krebons picture ^^; If you have made any other such drawings, I would like to see them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted July 3, 2009 Report Share Posted July 3, 2009 like to see the finished image^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PakstraX Posted July 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 Now at 90% finished! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 SSUUUUGOOIII~~!!! I like the art~~!! 10/10 The Effect as well~!!!9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 It's awesome. The pic I though could use a bit more color, but all in all, nice effect and great pic! 9.5/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dairuga Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 And now you only have to add a green swirly background =P I'd like to see it finished aswell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.