Cyber Altair Posted November 4, 2007 Report Share Posted November 4, 2007 here is my new set of dragons cards, they are more of dragon related traps and spells- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted November 4, 2007 Report Share Posted November 4, 2007 Getting better, but you need to work on your spelling and card grammar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted November 4, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2007 what can i say english isn't my first language so my grammer is a little low but i am seeing yogiuh cards effect and trying to write like them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted November 4, 2007 Report Share Posted November 4, 2007 And I give you credit for it; considering it's not your first lanugue, and I can hardly spell, when it is my own, is a good thing. Just to help you out: Ritual Summon is capitalized, you should use Tribute, not sacrifice (which I believe is what you were trying to spell), you should put ATK, when discribing the ATK points, and not attack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted November 4, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2007 thanks for the advice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted November 5, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 here are some more cards- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
keji masters Posted November 5, 2007 Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 is there such a thing as aquick play trap otherwise great set look forward to see more cus i love dragons Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted November 5, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 there are more but right now i am busy with my Dynasty warriors set. i have done some you can check them out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexsoxfan01 Posted November 5, 2007 Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 da clown you make good cards but the last 2 you just posted have some errors.Banned Dragons : could have a downside, and when the effect can be usedAttack of the dragons : being not bieng, and capitalize the k in ATKOh and by the way, what is your first language? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted November 5, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 sorry typing mistakes and my first language is arabic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexsoxfan01 Posted November 5, 2007 Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 sorry typing mistakes and my first language is arabic. oh really? my friend is arabic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted November 5, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 ya, here is a new card- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexsoxfan01 Posted November 5, 2007 Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 That is actually balanced but it should be written like this : "Pay 500 Life Points to look and select 1 card from your opponent's hand. The card is then shuffled in your deck" or something along the lines of that 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted November 5, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 geuss so anyway i thought of making it 1000 life points but then it would be underpowered or that's what i thought. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexsoxfan01 Posted November 5, 2007 Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 1000 Life Points is too much, 500 seems fine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted November 5, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 ya anyway these are more- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted November 5, 2007 Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 Getting better' date=' but you need to work on your spelling and card grammar.[/quote']Â That's right and BTW english isn't my 1st language either, but as you can see i speak well. The only thing you got to improve is grammar everything else 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
parkourmania Posted November 5, 2007 Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 I realy like dragon cards and those are really good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
keji masters Posted November 6, 2007 Report Share Posted November 6, 2007 da clown of hell can you give me a link to your dynasty warriors cards plesase Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted November 6, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2007 thanks for the comments everyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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