cacnea Posted July 5, 2009 Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 [align=center] [spoiler=Effect:]This Card can only be Summoned by paying 2000 Life Points. When this Card is Summoned all Cards on your Opponent's side of the Field are returned to your Opponent's Deck. [spoiler=Effect:]Sacrifice 1 "Mercy" on your side of the Field to Special Summon 1 "Mercy Dragorra" from your Deck or Hand to The Field. [spoiler=Effect:]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned when you Tribute a "Mercy" on your side of the field with the effect of a "Tyrannic Mercy." This card cannot be destroyed by battle. (apply damage calculation normally.) [spoiler=Effect:]This card may only be equipped to a "Mercy Dragorra" on your side of the field. You can then activate one of the following effects:* Increase the equipped card's ATK by 1000 points.* During your Main Phase, you can Tribute any "Mercy Dragorra" on your side of the field equipped with this card to Special Summon any "Mercy Dragorra Tyrannica" from your Hand or Deck. If this is the case, "Mercy Dragorra Tyrannica" cannot attack that turn. [spoiler=Effect:]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing one "Mercy Dragorra" equipped with "What I've Become" on your side of the field. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. (apply damage calculation normally.). RATE or HATE[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 5, 2009 Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 Mercy is far too powerful. Tune down its effect, lower its atk 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cacnea Posted July 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 B U M P... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 Mercy is far too powerful. Tune down its effect' date=' lower its atk[/quote'] Also, there are several OCG errors that need to be addressed.Plus, Mercy Dragorra's effect doesn't make sense, since "What I've Become" doesn't have a Special Summoning effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Card Constructor Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 Why is Mercy so easy to summon, has an over-powered effect, and is only a 2-star monster? Think your cards through... Tyrannic Mercy is also pretty unfair, as you can summon Mercy so easily and this card lets you summon Mercy Draggora from your DECK as a special summon. Mercy Draggora is ok (I guess), though the "not destroyed in battle" is just a lame way to give your cards more power. What I've Become should have the effect "Sacrifice one 'Mercy Dragon' on your side of the field to Special Summon 'Mercy Dragon (What I've Become)' from your Hand or Deck". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 thought your images aren't the best ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nman3399 Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 What the heck that thing is un beatable Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 OP, simple....yeah, that's basically the gist of your effects. Your OCG is also off. 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cacnea Posted July 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 I was inspired by a song to make these cards, and iw ill edit them soon... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 Mercy is far too powerful. Tune down its effect' date=' lower its atk[/quote'] Also, there are several OCG errors that need to be addressed.Plus, Mercy Dragorra's effect doesn't make sense, since "What I've Become" doesn't have a Special Summoning effect. ^^ What he said =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATG3192 Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 1.) For a Lv.2 monster, Mercy is really strong...I think if that's gonna be her effect then her ATK should at least be 1350. 2.) Tyrannic Mercy I really don't mind, it's just got some OCG errors, like take out "To the Field" because you're already stating that part by saying that you can special summon it. 3.) Mercy Dragorra...too powerful! I personally hate cards that say that they aren't destroyed as a result of battle but fail to mention any battle damage, implying that the user takes no battle damage, I find those cards cheap. So I say you should make the effect a bit more like this...~This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned when you Tribute a "Mercy" on your side of the field with the effect of a "Tyrannic Mercy." This card cannot be destroyed by battle. (apply damage calculation normally.) 4.) "What I've Become" I think shoudl go more like this...~This card may only be equipped to a "Mercy Dragorra" on your side of the field. You can then activate one of the following effects:• Increase the equipped card's ATK by 1000 points.• During your Main Phase, you can Tribute any "Mercy Dragorra" on your side of the field equipped with this card to Special Summon any "Mercy Dragorra Tyrannica" from your Hand or Deck. If this is the case, "Mercy Dragorra Tyrannica" cannot attack that turn. 5.) I personally feel that your strongest "Mercy" card should have it's name changed to "Mercy Dragorra Tyrannica." For a Lv.8 monster it's amazingly strong. I say you lower it's ATK to 3000-3500 if it's to stay at that lvl. It's OCG for the effect, mostly the same as what I suggested for "Mercy Dragorra." Here's how I think it should be worded...~This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing one "Mercy Dragorra" equipped with "What I've Become" on your side of the field. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. (apply damage calculation normally.) 6.) This pics aren't the best...the only one I like at all is the one for "Mercy Dragorra." 7.) Like everyone else said...way to OP!!! Tone most of it down and try using most of the corrections I stated and you shoudl be alright. Overall:~2.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cacnea Posted July 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 I've edited the cards... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 In my opinion lower her attack. Even with the cost. That's like taking 2000 points of damage then attacking for 2000 so it isn't really a cost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 Just a quick correction: Hand = hand Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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