tonystuan Posted July 5, 2009 Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 Here are some of my first cards.I was not sure if i have to put this into Fan Fic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 5, 2009 Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 Very, very poor. Why dragons? Also, you've managed to get the Winged Dragon of Ra's effect wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonystuan Posted July 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 1) there were my first cards,so 2) its negative to make dragons cards? 3) its not winged dragon of ra -.-'I know the effect of Ra -.- 4) why poor? 5) i think those cards wont be 1/10 O.o 6) i won a contest with 1 of them -.-' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 5, 2009 Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 1) there were my first cards' date='so[/quote'] And? 2) its negative to make dragons cards? Yes because they are incredibly overdone. 3) its not winged dragon of ra -.-'I know the effect of Ra -.- But it's a Normal Monster that you've turned into a Ritual Monster without changing it's type. 4) why poor? Lots of OCG errors' date=' some of the pics aren't very good, and your OCG needs work. 5) i think those cards wont be 1/10 O.o I never wrote that... 6) i won a contest with 1 of them -.-' I don't care. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hentrik Posted July 5, 2009 Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 Max Darkness your harsh, I mean it's only his first few cards, I bet you made OCG errors when you first started. ._. Anyways, onto the cards, their okay, just a word of advice, try not to do dragons, their not the best choice to choose seeing how overrated they are now. ._.' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonystuan Posted July 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 ah ok.that was he trying to say to me .__.so dragons are overated and so often seen, now i get it why he cant say it unterstandable O_O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
puppetdawn Posted July 5, 2009 Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 I´m impressed by the hellfire demon. It´s got a nice effect too. But it´s a bit... off board with the effect description. Otherwise than that, nice cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pussycat_boy15693 Posted July 5, 2009 Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 Arcadia Dragon: Common pic, common effect, bad OCG, OPed ---> Nothing special.Gochydro - Black Sun Dragon: Common pic, OPed, and I think the effect discarding cards from Deck to win is not legal.Hellfire Demon: Boring effect...Legendary Black Dragon - Deoragna: too OPed, needs a better pic.White Dragon - Legendary Sage: too OPed, and you should not take the pic from the card Blue-Eyes White Dragon to make your own card like that.Atem - Winged Dragon of Ra: TOO OPed!!! This is the worst of all those cards.Black Magician - Chaos Yami: I suggest you lower the Level, ATK & DEF of that card.Shuridrua - Hell Demon of Arcadie: Can you read the effect on your own card? I suggest this for all of your cards: Copy the description of each card and post it below the card.I must say these cards are very poor, and not realistic or balanced at all. You better get some knowledge about Yugioh cards before making and posting your own card on this forum.*P.S: Yes, I agree with Max Darkness. I don't care if any of your cards won contests or not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonystuan Posted July 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 So here the effect of the missing card. This card cannot be Normal,Special summon or set.This card can only be Special summoned by tributing up to 3 monsters on the oppenent field.This card get the follwings effect(s) by tributing the monster :1: This card cannot attack the opponent directly.2: During each of your Standby Phase, discard 1 of your hand cards.If you cannot,this card is destroyed and inflicts 2000 Direct Damage to you. 3: As long as this card remains on the field, skip your Main Phase 1 and 2.This card cannot be offert for any card effect. I know it cant be read. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hero2die Posted July 5, 2009 Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 the cards are normalbut u take not so good pics5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 5, 2009 Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 So here the effect of the missing card. This card cannot be Normal' date='Special summon or set.This card can only be Special summoned by tributing up to 3 monsters on the oppenent field.This card get the follwings effect(s) by tributing the monster :1: This card cannot attack the opponent directly.2: During each of your Standby Phase, discard 1 of your hand cards.If you cannot,this card is destroyed and inflicts 2000 Direct Damage to you. 3: As long as this card remains on the field, skip your Main Phase 1 and 2.This card cannot be offert for any card effect. I know it cant be read. xD[/quote'] Work on your OCG a lot since as it stands, this card cannot be Summoned at all! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted July 5, 2009 Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 White Dragon - Legendary Sage's art is alternate art of BEWD... =/ Also, punctuation does not serve as a space. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted July 5, 2009 Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 Not so good, OCG errors need to be fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pussycat_boy15693 Posted July 5, 2009 Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 Shuridua's effect suggestion: 1 ---> 2 and 2 ---> 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonystuan Posted July 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 hm. thxi think about.i try to do itnow i work on a fire set. x'D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted July 5, 2009 Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 [align=center]Most pictures are decent. Some are okay. Some are terrible.OCG is actually decent for someone who only just started making cards.Altogether: 5/10[/align]Max Darkness your harsh' date=' I mean it's only his first few cards, I bet you made OCG errors when you first started. ._.[/quote'] This is not a legimate excuse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted July 5, 2009 Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 Good start for your first cards. Your OCG is off and some of the pics are bad. It's a good first effort though. 5/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 5, 2009 Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 OCG errors, and pics are just siphoned off the anime :( 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 5, 2009 Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 To be honest with you these cards aren't the best. The pics are bad. OCG needs a lot of work. And Max Darkness isn't harsh people he's just stating the truth. 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 Dude, these truthfully are not very good. Most effects are poorly made, poorly copied, overdone, and the pics, I won't even start. Truthfully, in my eyes, these cards are pretty harsh-crap deserving.... You need to work on cards more, especially if you keep saying you'll win the contest like you say you will. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 I agree. You probably won't win a contest with these. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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