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SlAyEr73

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OK. Here are my comments:

Tribal Dragon God: It's too OPed. Lower its Level, ATK & DEF. You're new here, right? So this is a suggest for you: Don't try to make your cards too powerful, it'll become unbalanced and unrealistic.

Tribal Rage: Oped, too. It'd be better if you re-edit the effect like this, for example: This card can only be activated when your Life Points are less than your opponent's and the difference is 2000 points or less. Increase the ATK of your monster by the amount equal to the difference. When your Life Points are more than your opponent's, this card is destroyed.

Tribal Scorpion: Attacking Directly with an ATK of 1200 points is quite much. You can change its ATK up to 1600 points but add this part to your effect: 'If you activate this effect, the ATK of this card is halved'.

Tribal Sun Destroyer: It should be like this: '... inflict Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to half of the destroyed monster's ATK'.

Tribal Sword of the Warrior: 'This card can only be equipped to 'Tribal Warrior'. The equipped monster gains 500 points to its ATK and DEF and can attack twice during the same Battle Phase'.

Tribal Unity Dragon: Its effect should be: 'When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, it can attack once again in a row'. And its ATK & DEF shouldn't be more than 3000 points.

Your cards are not bad, you just have to improve the OCG.

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I first stopped at the tribal dragon god, due to the fact it's a vanilla.

 

Then I held my breath, looked down, and then stopped again at the white backgrounds.

 

I always say this to all noobs, go check other ppl's cards before u do ur own.

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