charmander and evolutions

[Parion555]

This is my first try after a long time so please rate.

 

[Dragoone]

saome ocg basic problems

 

CHARMANDER.

START WITH CAPITAL

You can only special summon this card by removing one Fire-Atributte from the field to the graveyard. Add 100 ATK and DEF to this card by every Fire-Attribute Monster in the graveyard.

Change the ATK/DEF to

100/100

if you want to make it better but is really not necesary

 

CHARMELEON

Better ocg, i think its lil overpowered,

"tribiuting" little mistake plz put "tributing"

 

CHARIZARD

Hmmm kinda boring effect if you want this could come handy

This card can only be special summoned by discarding one "Charmeleon" from the field. Once a turn, discard a monster from your hand, destroy all the monsters in your opponent field with lower ATK than your monster's DEF.

 

7-10

 

The pics can be a lot better, lil mistakes in ortographic and ocg but i think that they can be playable

[CatholicDogma]

I think they're cool. Ligit? Who's ligit? It's a website to make Yu-Gi-Oh cards. I appreciate the time it takes to make cards based around existing animes, I know, I'm making a Bleach set, and it can be difficult. And I like the pictures. Only thing that needs changing, is that you said "Once per turn you may tribute this card", but if it's tributed, you can't do it each turn. Charizard seems overpowered, heheh.

[Max Darkness]

Quite a lot of OCG errors so work on them.

[Dark Lightning]

6/10

[CatholicDogma]

Yeah, probably a 5/10. Grammar needs work. Overpowered...ness... needs work as well.

[Verebazs2]

Change them to Reptile-type, Charizard probably Dragon-type

some ocg basic problems

 

Charmander

START with Capital

You can Special Summon this card from your hand or Deck by sending 1 FIRE Monster from your side of the field to the Graveyard. Increase this card's ATK and DEF by 100 for each FIRE Monster in your Grvayard.

Change the ATK/DEF to

1000/1000

it's quite weak without any basic ATK/DEF' date=' and 100 is just more than nothing

 

Charmeleon

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by offering 1 "Charmander" you control as a Tribute. Once per turn you can decrease this card's ATK by 200 points to Special Summon 1 Level4 or lower FIRE Monster from your Graveyard to your side of the field."

 

Charizard

The effect seems OP, and not quite clear. Lets see, do you mean this:

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by offering 1 "Charmeleon" you control as a Tribute. You can remove this face-up position card on your side of the field from play, to Special Summon up to as many FIRE Monsters from your Graveyard, as possible to your side of the field, and destroy a number of Monster cards your Opponent controls equal to the number of FIRE Monsters you Summoned by this effect."?

[leoluiz]

Captalize the C on Charmander, Charmeleon and Charizard.

Captalize the P on Pyro at their types.

OCG needs work, the OCG fix is already posted.

Change Charmander's ATK and DEF to 1000

5/10

[Home Slice]

ocg-needs work

pics-not bad

effects-ok

overall 6.4/10

[tÖt]

Now you can get better pics. Try Photobucket.

5/10