mrfrosty Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 thinking of making a new set called aracnaterra, but unsure. i need help with the grammer. thanx:) [spoiler=lore]All Insect-Type monster on the field gains 400 ATK and 200 DEF. If the monster has "Spider", "Scorpion", "Aracnid", "Spideress" or "Scorpioness" in their name, they gain an additional 100 ATK and DEF. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan919 Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 Should have no /'s in it. Names should be Capitalized, and should say "Insect-Type monster" 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrfrosty Posted July 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 FIXED thank you for the tips Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan919 Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 Also, just fyi, it is supposed to be spelled "Arachnid" but I don't know because a lot of people misspell words on purpose. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tainted Wisdom Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 It's a pretty well done card. I am not sure if this is right, but it is what I would do. I would put each individual name in quotations. Eg. "Spider", "Scorpion", "Arachnid", "Spideress", "Scorpioness". Oh and on the Insect-Type part, you forgot to put a dash in between insect and type, and you also forgot to capitalize the "T" in type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ģค๓blє Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 All Insect-Type monster on the field gains 400 ATK and 200 DEF. If the monster has "Spider", "Scorpion", "Aracnid", "Spideress" or "Scorpioness" in their name, they gain an additional 100 ATK and DEF. Just some OCG ^_^ 9/10 not counting OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 Unless you're going for a romanticized spelling, it would "Temple of Arachnid". And you have way too many names to give them all an ATK boost... Besides, Fields that only boost ATK are lame... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrfrosty Posted July 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 fixed even more, i feel soo stupid for spelling arachnid wrong. since i dont know if i am making a set, i was unshure what other effect i could give it. im sure that this card will change overtime :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 effect pretty good, it's well balanced OCG is ok Picture not the best, but still good 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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