Duma_333 Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 I have rushed another card. Also, I have fixed the first card's problems. Bye. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phatt Mann Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 Well you have to remove the Description from the 2nd card. Effects and Descriptions don't go well together. The second card should be like this: You must Tribute 3 monsters you control to Normal Summon or Set this card. The Normal Summon of this card cannot be negated. When this card is Normal Summoned, a Spell, Trap, or Effect Monster Card cannot be activated. This card cannot be targeted by the effects of a Spell, Trap or Effect Monster. If this card is Special Summoned, it is sent to the Graveyard during the End Phase. This card's ATK is equal to the number of cards in your opponent's hand x700. Lastly, take out Symbol from its Sub-Type. It's not necessary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duma_333 Posted July 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 Thank's for the tip :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 These are awful. The first pic is overused and the card's a Vanilla.As for the second card, it's a Normal Monster with a description and an effect.Work on these...a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duma_333 Posted July 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 I just rushed something to see what responses will it have. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 I just rushed something to see what responses will it have. Well, do us a favour and don't. Put some time into your cards please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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