Armored Ressuruction

[gster321]

K so, i tried reading some OCG tips to make a good realistic card, i hope i improved enjoy :)

 

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

OCG fix:

"Discard 2 Machine-Type monsters from your hand to Special Summon a monster from your Graveyard in Defense Position. Increase it's DEF by 100 for each Spell Card on your side of the field."

 

its to OP and your OCG is ok but you misspelled alot of words and miscaps.

 

The pic is good but the effect is OP you need to have LEvel restriction and a drawback to the special summoned monster =/

 

for now 6/10

[gster321]

tru i agree Thanks :)

[Max Darkness]

Pretty good for a New Member! Make the OCG change above. I suggest making it Level 5 or lower monsters and they are destroyed after, say, 2/3 turns.

 

6/10

[gster321]

Pretty good for a New Member! Make the OCG change above. I suggest making it Level 5 or lower monsters and they are destroyed after' date=' say, 2/3 turns.

 

6/10

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yea , i should but i dont wanna make it all over again im in da process though thnks for dat tips relly appriciate it :)

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

you dont have to remake it just go back to the saved card and go into the description and patch it up

[Max Darkness]

Oh! I've just realised. Since this is a Quick-Play Spell Card, it'll need activation conditions as well.

 

So the effect:

Activate only when a monster on your side of the field is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard. Discard 2 Machine-Type monsters from your hand and Special Summon 1 Level 5 or lower monster from your Graveyard in face-up Defense Position. The summoned monster gains 100 DEF for each Spell Card on the field. During your second End Phase after this card was activated, the summoned monster is destroyed.

 

Plus, L.L.D. is right. Just go to the Card Maker section and open the saved version of this card and then add this effect instead of the old one.

[gster321]

Thanks Lovely Lady :) and Max Darkness I shall do it :)

[ragnarok1945]

OCG is ok, but effect is still unimpressive

 

7/10