koramore Posted July 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 Added Deidara Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Half Vamp Riku Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 you never seace to amaze me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedRecker Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 I like these, they are very good. You've really got your own thing going here with the two effects and that's cool. To continue from Roxas about Itachi's effect, I think you should make his effect around the Tsukuyomi or Amaterasu (I would probably go for Tsukuyomi). As Roxas explained Susanoo is a very powerful technique and if you were going to make that it might be better done as a seperate card.Also had a look at Kisame and his last effect about making the opponent skip the Draw Phase seems a little powerful. The cost is only one card and as you draw a card every turn you can stop them from drawing completely. I know it's not quite as bad as that little Spirit Monster on the banned list but with a little work you could pull of the same sort of thing with this card. Skipping a Draw Phase should be fairly costly, so how about making it 2 cards instead of 1? Well, it's just a suggestion, up to you. I still like them. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Culpa Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 I don't really like the bullet points.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 This thread needs more Zetsu Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koramore Posted July 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 I like these' date=' they are very good. You've really got your own thing going here with the two effects and that's cool. To continue from Roxas about Itachi's effect, I think you should make his effect around the Tsukuyomi or Amaterasu (I would probably go for Tsukuyomi). As Roxas explained Susanoo is a very powerful technique and if you were going to make that it might be better done as a seperate card.Also had a look at Kisame and his last effect about making the opponent skip the Draw Phase seems a little powerful. The cost is only one card and as you draw a card every turn you can stop them from drawing completely. I know it's not quite as bad as that little Spirit Monster on the banned list but with a little work you could pull of the same sort of thing with this card. Skipping a Draw Phase should be fairly costly, so how about making it 2 cards instead of 1? Well, it's just a suggestion, up to you. I still like them. Keep it up![/quote'] But on Kisame effect you have to get that effect first and I'm gonna mke the Spell Cards for Itachi's Mangekyou so you have to remove the mangekyou counters to use the spell cards oops spoiler I don't really like the bullet points.... I like the bullet points but I'm kinda lazy to change it but I like the bullets doesnt bother me. :) This thread needs more Zetsu I will ad Zetsu soon :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shonen Jump™ Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 effects are origional nice ocg =) you get a good rating from me =Dbut I dont know what to rate it so lets just say Epic/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koramore Posted July 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 Thanks :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 I love ZETSU!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koramore Posted July 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Half Vamp Riku Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koramore Posted July 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 Thanks added Orochimaru Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shonen Jump™ Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 damn I was going to use that pic xD awellEpic/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 I was gonna use the same picture for my orochimaru while in akatsuki ._. Once again Great Minds think alike. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Half Vamp Riku Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koramore Posted July 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 Lol ha popular pic thanks guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedRecker Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 When I first saw this I thought "Why Orochimaru?" and then I just remembered he used to be in Akatsuki. Lol, the things I forget sometimes (and I call myself a Naruto fan, shame on me). Just checked him and Zetsu out. They both seem fine as far as OCG is concerned, the effects are original and balanced and the pictures are awesome. I've never seen that Zetsu one before but I really like it and I like how you've done his ability to move around really quickly. I tried and kinda failed. I need to redo him actually. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrenTenkage Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 This art is so awesome I would give a 1000/10 if I could but I can only give you 10/10 I love these cards and you my good friend are awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mike_destrall Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 10/10 but you better correct the ocg on the last card... drop the "his/her"... its misplaced... it doesn't belong there... leave the rest untouched Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koramore Posted July 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 Thanks everyone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Devil Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 [align=center]Nice updates man!9.5/10 :P[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koramore Posted July 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 Thanks added Hidan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedRecker Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 Just saw Hidan. I like how you have done his immortality technique in the effect. My effect for Hidan is very similar (I changed it a bit so they're not too much the same now). I guess his immortality just suits itself to such an effect. Nice job. The picture is ok. Personally, it's not one I like that much (but that's just me), it is still a great card, keep it up. I can't wait to see what you do later on for Spell & Trap and any additional Support you decide to make.EDIT: Also, forgot to say, I don't think you need that bullet in the Gemini effect. I'm pretty sure Gemini monsters dont have bullets there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koramore Posted July 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 Thanks and I checked a Gemini monster and it does have a bullet check here: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedRecker Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 Ah, k. I was wondering if I might be wrong. Well done for looking that up and thanks for teaching me something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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