DL Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 I tried making non-anime based cards for the first time.If someone has already done "Immortal" monsters, I am unaware. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 2nd card's pic is Horrible. Horrible, horrible, horrible! OCG Fixes: As a result of battlle- by battle.damage step- Damage Step (I believe)graveyard- Graveyard.Main phase- Main Phasegets to- canStandby phase- Standby Phase The OCG was pretty bad, and the only thing thats takes them out of the name (Immortal) is that they're destroyed by card effects, which makes them not be immortal at all. The last one (Guardian), seems preety balanced. The fist one (Swordsman) is pretty good. And the 2nd one (Cyber) is also prett balanced. Mage is pretty good. It allows you to bounce a card, but makes your opponent Summon something.Archer is pretty balanced, since the immortals can't be destroyed by battle. Immortal Mage's pic has a border. Take it out. Fairly Good job. 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gil2m Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 6/10 uts because of the ocg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 some minor OCG errors, but overall the effects are balanced and the pics great 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 minor OCG errors great cards though and the pics are excellent 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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ragnarok1945 Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 You can combined the two sentences to This card cannot be destroyed in battle or by card effects Like Jowgan's effect, just graveyard only. Still, once this card gets on the field, it's going to hell to send him off, which might make him slightly OPed 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 like the pics bu the 1 needs a bg, ocg7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Updated Immortal reaper Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 only slightly better, but I'll raise the rate to 8.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 I had to fix the Immortal Dragon and Immortal Dark Dragon's effect and type. They were Spellcaster before, for some reason. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rook Bishop Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 these are great 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redtyson Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 Cool card but look at my card. ______________________________Click here to feed me a Star Fruit!Get your own at Flyffables! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 don't put your cards in another's thread without permission Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted August 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 Added first Immortal fusion, along with two other Immortals. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rook Bishop Posted September 15, 2009 Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 I give it an 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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